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7/16/2011 c1 70Reel Wander
Struggling to live your life,

Struggling to be you,

with your past, present, and tomorrow

the past is gone,

today is just today.

tomorrow is long way away

trying to forget, but could not

trying to hold on,

hold all the memories

and live your life

Nice Poem, full of emotion
3/26/2011 c1 EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
2/19/2011 c1 15Ice Bubble
So sad/sweet! Good job!
2/9/2011 c1 13MADdreamers
The more I read the more I like. You're really talented. I like how you left the story open enough to have readers think of their situations because it makes us feel like we can somehow relate to your story.
2/2/2011 c1 13samhus
Sad, but good. The last stanza was my favorite. Nice Job!
2/2/2011 c1 4Jamie Cooper
i like this rhyming pattern and the mystery behind the poem. It gives you room to make up your own version of events and also keeps your mind reeling with questions! i really like this. Keep it up

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