for Lycan Diaries9/11/2012 c9 incurablemar
I'm hoping this isn't the end, because I'm loving this story! They just need to mate already, lol, and then it can end. Very good though, and engaging, with great characters.
The only thing I would've liked to maybe see different is if before Sorren went through her change she was just average looking (not ugly or anything) and didn't really stand out, but she was always amazing on the inside, just nobody gave her a chance to show it. And of course the only person who did give her special attention before the change would be Braden. I guess I would've been able to relate to her a little more if she had been like that before the wolf came out. But your version is perfect just the way it is, trust me.
Wonderful story, if there's more coming, I'm looking forward to it!
I'm hoping this isn't the end, because I'm loving this story! They just need to mate already, lol, and then it can end. Very good though, and engaging, with great characters.
The only thing I would've liked to maybe see different is if before Sorren went through her change she was just average looking (not ugly or anything) and didn't really stand out, but she was always amazing on the inside, just nobody gave her a chance to show it. And of course the only person who did give her special attention before the change would be Braden. I guess I would've been able to relate to her a little more if she had been like that before the wolf came out. But your version is perfect just the way it is, trust me.
Wonderful story, if there's more coming, I'm looking forward to it!
6/24/2011 c9 vaniittyy222
Im loving it so far, there a couple if errors that i had to go back and read the section twice to really grasp the meaning, like the whole no lycan females part, i think that section should be clarified on. Like, females are born to lycans but it is rare for them to change or something. But overall its good enough for me to ignore. Btw, love Braden.
Im loving it so far, there a couple if errors that i had to go back and read the section twice to really grasp the meaning, like the whole no lycan females part, i think that section should be clarified on. Like, females are born to lycans but it is rare for them to change or something. But overall its good enough for me to ignore. Btw, love Braden.
35/6/2011 c9 Wolffang
Okay, I really like your story but you need to fix chapter 9 cause the final part of the chapter is there twice
Okay, I really like your story but you need to fix chapter 9 cause the final part of the chapter is there twice