for The Secret Keeper8/24/2011 c17 
1Racer283
Both chapters were really good can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.
1Racer283Both chapters were really good can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.
8/24/2011 c17 lovelesshope
FINALLY ! i was starting to think you forgot about us.
okay first of all good job on another amazing TWO chapters. i love drunk Sue and papa bear David. i love part were they they were talking about the movie it really showed how a bond is building between then. and hot damn who know Sue had the type of body lol.
but the real icing on the cake was the ending smooch, smooch lol.
keep up the good writing and i just can't wait for more.
FINALLY ! i was starting to think you forgot about us.
okay first of all good job on another amazing TWO chapters. i love drunk Sue and papa bear David. i love part were they they were talking about the movie it really showed how a bond is building between then. and hot damn who know Sue had the type of body lol.
but the real icing on the cake was the ending smooch, smooch lol.
keep up the good writing and i just can't wait for more.
7/30/2011 c15 lovelesshope
funny chapter. i love the part with the car. keep up the good work can't wait for more :)
funny chapter. i love the part with the car. keep up the good work can't wait for more :)
7/19/2011 c14 lovelesshope
love it has always
love it has always
7/5/2011 c13 Racer283
Pretty good chapter can't wait to read more of it. Also this chapter was quite entertaining. Keep up the good work.
Pretty good chapter can't wait to read more of it. Also this chapter was quite entertaining. Keep up the good work.
7/4/2011 c13 Lovelesshope
if i were sue i would have tossed him in the street and let a truck run him over lol. but i like who the come to realize they need each other.
good chapter and can't wait for the next
if i were sue i would have tossed him in the street and let a truck run him over lol. but i like who the come to realize they need each other.
good chapter and can't wait for the next
6/26/2011 c12 thesoprano
aww that was real expected. what happens next? update! now!
aww that was real expected. what happens next? update! now!
6/21/2011 c12 lovelesshope
this is amazing, you really make you characters come to life. it is very romantic. you doing a great job can't wait for more so hurry up and get the next chapter up lol.
this is amazing, you really make you characters come to life. it is very romantic. you doing a great job can't wait for more so hurry up and get the next chapter up lol.
5/15/2011 c11 notmuchbutlife24
OMGGGGG I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE CONTINUEEEE! i may be your hugest fan. i don't care if others are commenting beccause I AM IN LOOOOOOOVEEEE with your story! hahahahaha i can't wait for the next chapter!
OMGGGGG I LOVE YOUR STORY! PLEASE CONTINUEEEE! i may be your hugest fan. i don't care if others are commenting beccause I AM IN LOOOOOOOVEEEE with your story! hahahahaha i can't wait for the next chapter!