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for A Mother's Sorrow

2/7/2011 c1 CCKins
D: You use very lovely detail in the story! I could just picture the scene right there, and how the mother must have felt and wanted to take the punishment.

L: The length of the story is perfect. How you get everything to fit in the short story with so much detail uses talent, and I can tell you have a lot of it.

E: It was a very interesting story, and a pleasure to read! I generally like stories with blood and gore, so I was satisfied when I got that little bit! Very well done!

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