for The Boy Who Eats Hearts6/24/2011 c11 sw33tdaisie
thanx for the update...and I just need to say this: I really wanna see Destiny hear Georgiana's sister badmouth her cuz I wanna see Destiny stand up for Georgiana and knock her sister down a few pegs! But if it doesn't happen, I can just imagine it...again thanx for the update and can't wait for the next chapter!
thanx for the update...and I just need to say this: I really wanna see Destiny hear Georgiana's sister badmouth her cuz I wanna see Destiny stand up for Georgiana and knock her sister down a few pegs! But if it doesn't happen, I can just imagine it...again thanx for the update and can't wait for the next chapter!
6/24/2011 c11 porcelainstars
Nice update! You're really good in building up the plot for this story. I just hope that you won't put more drama on it or make it complicated like other stories. Update sooner please please. ;)
Nice update! You're really good in building up the plot for this story. I just hope that you won't put more drama on it or make it complicated like other stories. Update sooner please please. ;)
6/24/2011 c11 CrazyGirlMo
I don't like her mother. And I feel so bad for Georgiana! She doesn't deserve all this. Crystal is such a brat. Going and being mean to poor Georgiana like that! Take that bitch! Micah is actually there to pick little G up! So hah! Sorry, I just really hate her sister. But I love how she went speechless. Priceless! Micah is soo ugh! He is stupid and clueless and just hard to deal with, but for some reason, these qualities are endearing on him instead of the other way around. So I kind of love him. The reason fails to appear in front of me. Hahahaha Jensen is absolutely hysterical! I love him already! And I love this chapter! Can't wait for more (:
I don't like her mother. And I feel so bad for Georgiana! She doesn't deserve all this. Crystal is such a brat. Going and being mean to poor Georgiana like that! Take that bitch! Micah is actually there to pick little G up! So hah! Sorry, I just really hate her sister. But I love how she went speechless. Priceless! Micah is soo ugh! He is stupid and clueless and just hard to deal with, but for some reason, these qualities are endearing on him instead of the other way around. So I kind of love him. The reason fails to appear in front of me. Hahahaha Jensen is absolutely hysterical! I love him already! And I love this chapter! Can't wait for more (:
6/24/2011 c11 
2Linq
Well I'm definitely looking forward to the update :D
And sure, I bet Micah WOULD tap a fatty ;)
2LinqWell I'm definitely looking forward to the update :D
And sure, I bet Micah WOULD tap a fatty ;)
6/24/2011 c11 TeeReeses24
Omg, I love this story! LOL, it's amazing!
lots of love, keep writing, you have talent!
xoxo
Omg, I love this story! LOL, it's amazing!
lots of love, keep writing, you have talent!
xoxo
5/30/2011 c10 KT
sorry, im too lazy to log on... but you should definitely continue with this story :) its one of the better written ones I've seen and the plot is new and fun for FP! ^^ that and your characters are so outa of the usual mold its really refreshing to just read it :) so pleasee don't stop
sorry, im too lazy to log on... but you should definitely continue with this story :) its one of the better written ones I've seen and the plot is new and fun for FP! ^^ that and your characters are so outa of the usual mold its really refreshing to just read it :) so pleasee don't stop
5/26/2011 c10 PJ Draft
I would like to see this countiued because I do like it, however, I do understand. Somewhere in the middle of every written story I think to myself, I am tired of writing this. :D I would like to see another chapter of this or at least some kind of 'end' however, don't force yourself. -PJ
I would like to see this countiued because I do like it, however, I do understand. Somewhere in the middle of every written story I think to myself, I am tired of writing this. :D I would like to see another chapter of this or at least some kind of 'end' however, don't force yourself. -PJ
5/24/2011 c10 MissWinchester21
This story is FANTASTIC! PLEASE, do finish it! I really enjoy reading about Micah & Georgiana (: ahaha, i can c y this story would b popular; it's really addicting! i finish a chapter & i must read another one ;P keep up the amazing work! & finish it...k? ;)
This story is FANTASTIC! PLEASE, do finish it! I really enjoy reading about Micah & Georgiana (: ahaha, i can c y this story would b popular; it's really addicting! i finish a chapter & i must read another one ;P keep up the amazing work! & finish it...k? ;)
5/24/2011 c10 porcelainstars
I love this story. I mean I really really REALLY love it. I hope you continue and finish it. I would really like to see how the characters would evolve and the love story unfolds. :)
I love this story. I mean I really really REALLY love it. I hope you continue and finish it. I would really like to see how the characters would evolve and the love story unfolds. :)
5/24/2011 c10 EM
Please don't have Micah fall in love with her. Organically introduce further characters (or, heck, make her gay) and move on. (Also: no pregnancies unless you feel like actually talking about birth control and abortion because most American fictionpress authors don't bother; I'd love some training scenes and how tough this is to lose weight and be in shape... as much as I appreciate and enjoy stuff like waxing I also know how much it sucks, though as a guy actually having the apparent FP ideal of a six pack and built is not fun either).
Basically I love the opening idea, enjoy the story so far, and think there are plenty of ways to go. It's not so much a FP thing but if you go to to the best longform stories on Storiesonline (registration and much word porn abound) you can see how people plot long romantic stories (with, sure, sex) beyond the 3-4 tropes on FP.
Please don't have Micah fall in love with her. Organically introduce further characters (or, heck, make her gay) and move on. (Also: no pregnancies unless you feel like actually talking about birth control and abortion because most American fictionpress authors don't bother; I'd love some training scenes and how tough this is to lose weight and be in shape... as much as I appreciate and enjoy stuff like waxing I also know how much it sucks, though as a guy actually having the apparent FP ideal of a six pack and built is not fun either).
Basically I love the opening idea, enjoy the story so far, and think there are plenty of ways to go. It's not so much a FP thing but if you go to to the best longform stories on Storiesonline (registration and much word porn abound) you can see how people plot long romantic stories (with, sure, sex) beyond the 3-4 tropes on FP.
5/24/2011 c10 2KChanSiYi
Since I generally never give reviews, you can see how much I like the story. I like where it's going and I do hope that you will continue it. However, I also know what it's like to have ideas and then see them in a different light after a while. No pressure, do what you can, and don't write out of style for your viewers. It'll be a shame to see this story go though.
Much love,
~K-chan
2KChanSiYiSince I generally never give reviews, you can see how much I like the story. I like where it's going and I do hope that you will continue it. However, I also know what it's like to have ideas and then see them in a different light after a while. No pressure, do what you can, and don't write out of style for your viewers. It'll be a shame to see this story go though.
Much love,
~K-chan
5/24/2011 c10 njw5s
Definitely keep writing! I actually like this story because I love seeing an ugly duckling turn into a beautiful swan, yaknow? And also I love how you are taking it slow and not rushing anything. So yes please keep writing!
Definitely keep writing! I actually like this story because I love seeing an ugly duckling turn into a beautiful swan, yaknow? And also I love how you are taking it slow and not rushing anything. So yes please keep writing!
5/24/2011 c10 midnight
You can't end it. It is a really interesting story and I want to keep reading it. So please keep working on it and please update faster! :)
You can't end it. It is a really interesting story and I want to keep reading it. So please keep working on it and please update faster! :)
5/24/2011 c10 CrazyGirlMo
Oh my God, Crystal is a total bitch! How can a sister be like that? And Micah is so stupid! He does stuff wrong, says the worst things and doesn't even realize it! He'd get beaten up if it wasn't for Destiny. Well maybe not, since he's the Golden Boy and all, but you know what I mean. I love this! I can't wait till people see Georgina!
Oh my God, Crystal is a total bitch! How can a sister be like that? And Micah is so stupid! He does stuff wrong, says the worst things and doesn't even realize it! He'd get beaten up if it wasn't for Destiny. Well maybe not, since he's the Golden Boy and all, but you know what I mean. I love this! I can't wait till people see Georgina!