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8/2/2013 c2 136Elliptical Shapes
I enjoyed reading this, love the idea that there is something called "dogwood" lol

Also really feeling the imagery I was getting of the prideful blackberries puffing out their fruitiness!

Solid imagery of a lovely summers day.

Alan.
8/2/2013 c1 Elliptical Shapes
Hi Kristina,

Sorry I'm not that much of a reader of stories on this site, glad to find some of your old poems here to read though!

I think describing the cat as "regal" helps to give it soul in the poem, it allows me to imagine it being a cat (hope that makes sense)

Chilled and relaxing work.

Alan

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