
4/30/2013 c4
3TheClosetWriter16
Of course I'm still reading ;) Thank you for the mention in the chapter haha . Another amazing chapter! Just a question, why do you write in italics? I can't wait to read more!

Of course I'm still reading ;) Thank you for the mention in the chapter haha . Another amazing chapter! Just a question, why do you write in italics? I can't wait to read more!
4/29/2013 c4
5HopelessGenius
This story is so...pretty. I know that's a weird way to put it and makes practically no sense whatsoever but that's how I think of it. Maybe it's just her personality and how sweet Lucas is under all the asshole but I really like this. Though I hope she breaks up with Derrek soon...hitting girls is a big no-no!
Hopeless

This story is so...pretty. I know that's a weird way to put it and makes practically no sense whatsoever but that's how I think of it. Maybe it's just her personality and how sweet Lucas is under all the asshole but I really like this. Though I hope she breaks up with Derrek soon...hitting girls is a big no-no!
Hopeless
4/17/2013 c3
3TheClosetWriter16
I hope your surgeries all went fine! And the headaches get better :)
Well I hope this makes you feel the least bit better: AMAZING chapter :D i really enjoyed it. The ending was really nice ;)

I hope your surgeries all went fine! And the headaches get better :)
Well I hope this makes you feel the least bit better: AMAZING chapter :D i really enjoyed it. The ending was really nice ;)
4/15/2013 c2 Madicus
Loving the new version. Update update update!
Loving the new version. Update update update!
2/15/2013 c20 csorciere
I know that while I utilize fanfiction, I have been hesitant to post original pieces over here on FP. I have seen so many authors that have mentioned that their works have been copied, and I don't want that. I want to share my writing for others to enjoy, but I certainly do not want someone to snatch my words and claim them for their own because it isn't right whether they profit from it or not.
The above said...if you decide to move your work to another site like AO3 or anything like that, please let us know. I know that I would like to continue with this story and explore along with you to see where this goes. I acknowledge your previous points about trying to make the storyline as realistic as you can while dealing with an unlikely base story. Regardless of what you decide, please keep writing as your health and time permits. It is definitely worthwhile.
I know that while I utilize fanfiction, I have been hesitant to post original pieces over here on FP. I have seen so many authors that have mentioned that their works have been copied, and I don't want that. I want to share my writing for others to enjoy, but I certainly do not want someone to snatch my words and claim them for their own because it isn't right whether they profit from it or not.
The above said...if you decide to move your work to another site like AO3 or anything like that, please let us know. I know that I would like to continue with this story and explore along with you to see where this goes. I acknowledge your previous points about trying to make the storyline as realistic as you can while dealing with an unlikely base story. Regardless of what you decide, please keep writing as your health and time permits. It is definitely worthwhile.
1/8/2013 c21
1Princess Of Perfection
LeaveThePieces;
You are an amazing writer. Do not let anyone tell you differently. I am extremely sorry about your illness and send my condolences to you and the other person dealing with this sickness. You have no idea how upset this makes me that you are not well. I hope the best and that your surgeries go fine and that by some miracle, you heal. If you ever need someone to talk to, please feel free to message me. Take time while updating your story and take care of yourself first. Good luck (: -PrincessOfPerfection

LeaveThePieces;
You are an amazing writer. Do not let anyone tell you differently. I am extremely sorry about your illness and send my condolences to you and the other person dealing with this sickness. You have no idea how upset this makes me that you are not well. I hope the best and that your surgeries go fine and that by some miracle, you heal. If you ever need someone to talk to, please feel free to message me. Take time while updating your story and take care of yourself first. Good luck (: -PrincessOfPerfection
1/3/2013 c14 Bluw moon
I think you need to reread your story cuz first she thinks she might not like his dick and the then she says that she knows how to give a handjob. This isnt the first time she contradics herself
I think you need to reread your story cuz first she thinks she might not like his dick and the then she says that she knows how to give a handjob. This isnt the first time she contradics herself
1/3/2013 c7 Bluw moon
I feel that rina is wrong in this chapter, meaning luke should be angry with her. She keeps mentioning her ex and then she thinks luke is trying to drive her away. Great story, none the less
I feel that rina is wrong in this chapter, meaning luke should be angry with her. She keeps mentioning her ex and then she thinks luke is trying to drive her away. Great story, none the less
1/3/2013 c17 csorciere
I got to this chapter, and I was a little confused. We went from the first, I love you, to her losing one of the babies, and her leaving him over something that I don't think we witnessed. Perhaps, you'll clear it up in the chapters coming up.
I got to this chapter, and I was a little confused. We went from the first, I love you, to her losing one of the babies, and her leaving him over something that I don't think we witnessed. Perhaps, you'll clear it up in the chapters coming up.
1/2/2013 c21 Reader
I'm so proud of you.
I'm so proud of you.