
2/23/2011 c2
1Candescence
Hola! This is a nice chapter. Are you only going to do narration, or is there going to be dialogue too? I can't wait to see what happens next between them. Hurry and update!

Hola! This is a nice chapter. Are you only going to do narration, or is there going to be dialogue too? I can't wait to see what happens next between them. Hurry and update!
2/14/2011 c1 Candescence
You just had to put the eyelid thing ;). It's good prologue. She has to many insecurities though *cough, cough, hint* I'm sure she's beautiful and wonderful and great. Hahaha! Hurry up and update
You just had to put the eyelid thing ;). It's good prologue. She has to many insecurities though *cough, cough, hint* I'm sure she's beautiful and wonderful and great. Hahaha! Hurry up and update