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2/17/2005 c1 4Sasquatcha
its a different take on the usual lucifer, but its great work ^_^
8/23/2003 c1 18Phoenix Ignition
That was unique. It's not a theme used very often.
6/11/2003 c1 Lucifers-Helper
Cool poem!
9/17/2002 c1 19Sinhe
I loved the images you put across in this poem. Very, very cool. I especially liked the charred throne, that's an awesome image. I loved how you built Lucifer's character as more stoic and calm then satanic and cruel. The vocabulary in this was great. As well, I know you probably could care less what I liked or didn't like, but in your profile you asked for construcive criticism, and I have one small bit to but across. In this piece, sometimes with all the long words and phrases, you lost the rythym of the poem, and this took away from the poem, in my opinion. But I still loved the impression and the description! I hope that you keep posting and writing!

-Sinhe
5/20/2001 c1 Majin Angel
i never thought of anything like this- quite clever of you, might i add. though i had to consult my dictionary on more than one occasion, it was excellent, and now i almost understand how the eternally damned feel. anyway, excellent job. keep up the great work!

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