for The Myriad Calamities of Luke LaChance4/25/2021 c1 santosjudy437
Awesome story you got here! I like how the plot is going. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
Awesome story you got here! I like how the plot is going. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
2/22/2011 c1 
3Misty Rius
This is a really interesting story, and I like the way you used phrases like "weeping crimson" to create imagery. The only problem I really have with this chapter is that for the beginning of Mary Fortune's intro, you called her "Miss Fortune" and then all of a sudden called her "Mary."
That's all I really have to say for now. Can't wait till the next chapter!
Keep Writing,
~Misty
3Misty RiusThis is a really interesting story, and I like the way you used phrases like "weeping crimson" to create imagery. The only problem I really have with this chapter is that for the beginning of Mary Fortune's intro, you called her "Miss Fortune" and then all of a sudden called her "Mary."
That's all I really have to say for now. Can't wait till the next chapter!
Keep Writing,
~Misty