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4/25/2021 c1 santosjudy437
Awesome story you got here! I like how the plot is going. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
2/22/2011 c1 3Misty Rius
This is a really interesting story, and I like the way you used phrases like "weeping crimson" to create imagery. The only problem I really have with this chapter is that for the beginning of Mary Fortune's intro, you called her "Miss Fortune" and then all of a sudden called her "Mary."

That's all I really have to say for now. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Keep Writing,

~Misty

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