for Not Alone9/11/2011 c5 
3TeamPeeta13
Okay, Jay kidnapped her, Mitch is somewhere else, hopefully alive. Alright. Got it!
3TeamPeeta13Okay, Jay kidnapped her, Mitch is somewhere else, hopefully alive. Alright. Got it!
9/11/2011 c4 TeamPeeta13
I'm still super confused.
Okay, so Mitch captured her, and is talking to her now... right? Or is it Jay she's talking to?
I'm lost.
I'm still super confused.
Okay, so Mitch captured her, and is talking to her now... right? Or is it Jay she's talking to?
I'm lost.
9/11/2011 c3 TeamPeeta13
I'm glad you'll explain whatever THAT was in the next chapter, because I am sooo confused.
I'm glad you'll explain whatever THAT was in the next chapter, because I am sooo confused.
9/11/2011 c1 TeamPeeta13
I'm soo interested right now. Who's coming? And you're an excellent writer by the way
I'm soo interested right now. Who's coming? And you're an excellent writer by the way
3/9/2011 c2 XshadowxdemonX
How did he recover so damn fast. I've kicked one of my best guy friends there because he started to laugh when he heard me sinig in the school hall way, and at the very od of the day he was limping because of the pain...
~Among the Hidden
How did he recover so damn fast. I've kicked one of my best guy friends there because he started to laugh when he heard me sinig in the school hall way, and at the very od of the day he was limping because of the pain...
~Among the Hidden
3/9/2011 c5 The First Winter Snow
Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! YOU HAD BETTER UPDATE SOON!
Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! YOU HAD BETTER UPDATE SOON!
2/24/2011 c4 PJ Draft
The flashbacks will eventally get boring, so do remember not to use them as a cructh. As for if I am confused, no I am not. Suprised people found it confusing. You made it rather clear about who the characters are. Anyway, I am looking forward to more soon. Update when you can! I'll be back to read more! :) -PJ
The flashbacks will eventally get boring, so do remember not to use them as a cructh. As for if I am confused, no I am not. Suprised people found it confusing. You made it rather clear about who the characters are. Anyway, I am looking forward to more soon. Update when you can! I'll be back to read more! :) -PJ
2/22/2011 c4 The First Winter Snow
All I have to say is, you were right; it did surprise me, and irritate me quite a bit (in a good way of course!). Can't wait for the next chapter...WRITE MORE IMMEDIATELY, OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!
All I have to say is, you were right; it did surprise me, and irritate me quite a bit (in a good way of course!). Can't wait for the next chapter...WRITE MORE IMMEDIATELY, OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!
2/22/2011 c4 5TheRiverRunsDeep
She better slap him, and be like no, I am staying home. I mean he comes back and just expects her to fall in his arms, I think she need a little woman power and say no, but ist your story...AND I AM LOVING EVERY WORD OF IT! I hope you post soon..or else...just joking, but seriously I want more!
5TheRiverRunsDeepShe better slap him, and be like no, I am staying home. I mean he comes back and just expects her to fall in his arms, I think she need a little woman power and say no, but ist your story...AND I AM LOVING EVERY WORD OF IT! I hope you post soon..or else...just joking, but seriously I want more!
2/22/2011 c2 TheRiverRunsDeep
I hate the cliffhanger, but that means there is more and more makes me smile...LOVE THIS STORY!
I hate the cliffhanger, but that means there is more and more makes me smile...LOVE THIS STORY!