for Never Say Never7/29/2013 c8 anonymous
update please
update please
1/26/2012 c11 
1sodapop776
Alright, so I'm sad that your going to stop writing this story. No one can finish it the way it was origanilly intended. I may not like the fact you want to stop writing this stroy, but I accept it...
Hope things turn out for you.
1sodapop776Alright, so I'm sad that your going to stop writing this story. No one can finish it the way it was origanilly intended. I may not like the fact you want to stop writing this stroy, but I accept it...
Hope things turn out for you.
1/16/2012 c11 1spottedfire98
You know my heart stopped when I heard you werent going to finish this story:( but I understand your reasons:) I did enjoy this story while it lasted:)
1spottedfire98You know my heart stopped when I heard you werent going to finish this story:( but I understand your reasons:) I did enjoy this story while it lasted:)
1/14/2012 c10 1Jessica Anderson
Very original and witty, well done! You definitely know how to keep us glued to the page :)
1Jessica AndersonVery original and witty, well done! You definitely know how to keep us glued to the page :)
8/15/2011 c10 1sodapop776
hehehe. Calla got the Captian good! But i feel bad cuz she had to leave): Can't wait to read what happens(:
1sodapop776hehehe. Calla got the Captian good! But i feel bad cuz she had to leave): Can't wait to read what happens(:
8/13/2011 c10 Blondiej1
Wow I have to tell you that this is one amazing story and that you are an amazing writer, I cannot wait to see what happens next so *puppy dog eyes* please post the next chapter asap. And what ever happened to adrian or the 12next year old soldier she met when she first got there?
Until Next Time,
Sarah
A.k.a Blondiej1
Wow I have to tell you that this is one amazing story and that you are an amazing writer, I cannot wait to see what happens next so *puppy dog eyes* please post the next chapter asap. And what ever happened to adrian or the 12next year old soldier she met when she first got there?
Until Next Time,
Sarah
A.k.a Blondiej1
8/11/2011 c10 bluelibellule13
I just found this story today, and I'm very interested to see how this all turns out! I have no idea what will happen next... But I can't wait for the next update!
~Elise
I just found this story today, and I'm very interested to see how this all turns out! I have no idea what will happen next... But I can't wait for the next update!
~Elise
8/8/2011 c9 sodapop776
Glad you wrote another chapter(: Its nice to find out come of Calla's past. Love this story so far(:
Glad you wrote another chapter(: Its nice to find out come of Calla's past. Love this story so far(:
7/31/2011 c9 1Chey1115
Gah! It ended too soon! :(
I really liked this chapter, because I'm a sucker when it comes to somebody hiding their history then it being revealed. You had me wrapped around your finger during this chapter. I LOVED it :D. I hope you write more quickly :)
1Chey1115Gah! It ended too soon! :(
I really liked this chapter, because I'm a sucker when it comes to somebody hiding their history then it being revealed. You had me wrapped around your finger during this chapter. I LOVED it :D. I hope you write more quickly :)
6/22/2011 c8 2Randomfire
Sorry I haven't reviewed the previous chapter! D;
Its great that you've started to write again =)
Just something to keep in check, make sure the character's actions are firmly linked to the character itself, I was caught off guard once and had to figure out who was doing what. =P
I loved this chapter, the dialogue between Calanthe and the Captain is so sweet. Calanthe's voice in this story is portrayed in quite a unique and interesting way. I can't really pin point what's so special about it, but it creates quite an airy yet feisty atmosphere around her. Since this story is set in a medieval time, when women were taught to be obedient and graceful, its quite hilarious watching Calanthe pound Rose's head in and kicking guys butts. )
Anyways good job! Keep writing! You've got quite a handful of readers now!
2RandomfireSorry I haven't reviewed the previous chapter! D;
Its great that you've started to write again =)
Just something to keep in check, make sure the character's actions are firmly linked to the character itself, I was caught off guard once and had to figure out who was doing what. =P
I loved this chapter, the dialogue between Calanthe and the Captain is so sweet. Calanthe's voice in this story is portrayed in quite a unique and interesting way. I can't really pin point what's so special about it, but it creates quite an airy yet feisty atmosphere around her. Since this story is set in a medieval time, when women were taught to be obedient and graceful, its quite hilarious watching Calanthe pound Rose's head in and kicking guys butts. )
Anyways good job! Keep writing! You've got quite a handful of readers now!
6/20/2011 c8 1Chey1115
I was so excited to see that there was another chapter when I came home from chilling around town today.
I love the Captain. Though he confuses me sometimes. In a good way. He just seems young at times, and old at other times. He's still awesome, with his anger problems and secret lust for Calla. I was seriously freaking out when Rose came and tried to win him over. Rose deserved more than one punch ;)
I can not wait until the next chapter. I wish the chapters were longer, or I didn't read so fast. All good stories end too fast
1Chey1115I was so excited to see that there was another chapter when I came home from chilling around town today.
I love the Captain. Though he confuses me sometimes. In a good way. He just seems young at times, and old at other times. He's still awesome, with his anger problems and secret lust for Calla. I was seriously freaking out when Rose came and tried to win him over. Rose deserved more than one punch ;)
I can not wait until the next chapter. I wish the chapters were longer, or I didn't read so fast. All good stories end too fast
6/20/2011 c1 1sodapop776
This seems like a really great book(: I only read some of it but I really like it(:
1sodapop776This seems like a really great book(: I only read some of it but I really like it(: