
2/26/2011 c1
1Cyclone101
WOW that was good. It was a bit confusing at first. One thing that I do not get what happened to your friend?
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You could make your peice less confusing (There is a scar above my eye where the cat kissed me)
I am guessing you meant this (There is a scar above my eye where the cat scratched me)
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WOW that was good. It was a bit confusing at first. One thing that I do not get what happened to your friend? Other than that it was good.
Rating
98%

WOW that was good. It was a bit confusing at first. One thing that I do not get what happened to your friend?
Feedback
You could make your peice less confusing (There is a scar above my eye where the cat kissed me)
I am guessing you meant this (There is a scar above my eye where the cat scratched me)
Comments
WOW that was good. It was a bit confusing at first. One thing that I do not get what happened to your friend? Other than that it was good.
Rating
98%