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9/24/2011 c1 Blueink24
The personification was excellent. I know not many people can pull off a poem like this, so I was very impressed. Not much to give constructive criticism on with this, because it was basically perfect, but if I had to pick something, maybe spacing between lines? Maybe you could double space them or something.

Anyway, keep writing!

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