for Dueling the Duke1/7/2012 c32 
8CrazyCowgirl101
Completely and utterly amazing :) very realistic! The attention to detail is great! I loved this!
8CrazyCowgirl101Completely and utterly amazing :) very realistic! The attention to detail is great! I loved this!
12/30/2011 c32 stargiggles
I'm so glad Olivia's attitude changed for the better near the end. I'm very happy how the story ended. It just makes me feel so giddy how Royce and Olivia show their affections towards each other. Great story! :)
I'm so glad Olivia's attitude changed for the better near the end. I'm very happy how the story ended. It just makes me feel so giddy how Royce and Olivia show their affections towards each other. Great story! :)
12/26/2011 c32 sarah.evangelina
Okay, she definately grew on my towards the end when her horrible attitude changed. I loved this, it was cute, really. 3
Okay, she definately grew on my towards the end when her horrible attitude changed. I loved this, it was cute, really. 3
12/26/2011 c15 sarah.evangelina
Okay, I know I'm only into the 15th chapter, but I cannot stand Olivia, she's such a BRAT! I mean the guys mother dies, and what does she worry about? Having to wait to marry him! I mean, come on, show a little human empathy! If you love someone that shouldn't be your top thought, I mean really? And I get that when she was little she got the idea to become a duchess because her dad had to explain the way things worked in those days, but really, I'd hoped that she'd have matured a little! I get that in those days a title and money were everything, but can't this girl have a little dignity? It seems like she only wants to marry him because he's a Duke, and with that title she'll have money, and prestige because who can turn up teir nose to a Duchess, besides the royals? And because he's handsome and is something she can't have. I think she needs a little depth.
Okay, I know I'm only into the 15th chapter, but I cannot stand Olivia, she's such a BRAT! I mean the guys mother dies, and what does she worry about? Having to wait to marry him! I mean, come on, show a little human empathy! If you love someone that shouldn't be your top thought, I mean really? And I get that when she was little she got the idea to become a duchess because her dad had to explain the way things worked in those days, but really, I'd hoped that she'd have matured a little! I get that in those days a title and money were everything, but can't this girl have a little dignity? It seems like she only wants to marry him because he's a Duke, and with that title she'll have money, and prestige because who can turn up teir nose to a Duchess, besides the royals? And because he's handsome and is something she can't have. I think she needs a little depth.
11/9/2011 c32 3Brightheart
so good. loved it. couldn't stop reading it till the end. plz have a sequel...
3Brightheartso good. loved it. couldn't stop reading it till the end. plz have a sequel...
10/30/2011 c32 Regina de Morte a.k.a. Mezza
Love this story. Have you read Jane Austen? I see heavy influences in this. Also I would love to beta this and help correct some translation flaws...
Mezza
Quite wonderful to read.
Love this story. Have you read Jane Austen? I see heavy influences in this. Also I would love to beta this and help correct some translation flaws...
Mezza
Quite wonderful to read.
10/3/2011 c3 The Imagination Addict
ahh... i was surprised when you wrote him being so enamoured by her beauty and was wondering how you'd have him determined not to have her. this makes sense.
ahh... i was surprised when you wrote him being so enamoured by her beauty and was wondering how you'd have him determined not to have her. this makes sense.
10/2/2011 c32 Hannytanny
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... So romantic! =) Great work!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... So romantic! =) Great work!
9/28/2011 c1 J.Szewczuk
Very cute story so far, I am looking forward to reading more.
Just a few typing errors I noticed (in case you want to correct them):
"The highest rank. Other than the royal family, you can`t get any higher that, my dear." - higher than that
She was a fine girl with golden girls that framed a round face offset by a stubborn jut of the chin, - golden curls, not golden girls... that was a sitcom!
He`s have to spend the entire ball chasing the rakes away with his dueling pistols. - he'd have
Very cute story so far, I am looking forward to reading more.
Just a few typing errors I noticed (in case you want to correct them):
"The highest rank. Other than the royal family, you can`t get any higher that, my dear." - higher than that
She was a fine girl with golden girls that framed a round face offset by a stubborn jut of the chin, - golden curls, not golden girls... that was a sitcom!
He`s have to spend the entire ball chasing the rakes away with his dueling pistols. - he'd have
9/28/2011 c31 Guest
This chicka has the cojones to be offended when she tricked him into marriage? He is p-whipped.
This chicka has the cojones to be offended when she tricked him into marriage? He is p-whipped.
9/25/2011 c19 mintystar
OMG OMG OMG OMGOMG O OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. WHAT THE HELL DID SHE JUST DO?
OMG OMG OMG OMGOMG O OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG. WHAT THE HELL DID SHE JUST DO?
9/25/2011 c18 mintystar
i literally OH MY GAWD when she dampened her dress. seriously.
i literally OH MY GAWD when she dampened her dress. seriously.
9/24/2011 c32 Jae
Loved Priscilla Randal's story. Love Olivia's even more! (: Lovely ending. (:
Loved Priscilla Randal's story. Love Olivia's even more! (: Lovely ending. (:
9/24/2011 c32 Dancing In A Flowerfield
YES!
*twirls around in circles for about five minutes then falls to the ground*
That was unbelievable. The only bad part about it was now its all over and I can't look at my fictionpress inbox every Saturday and see a new chapter. I loved every moment of it whether it was having to sit on the edge of my seat and wait a whole seven days for the next chapter or thoroughly enjoying the new places you would take the story. You are a talented author and I honestly cannot wait for a new story by you, whether that be soon or months from now.
Lily S.
YES!
*twirls around in circles for about five minutes then falls to the ground*
That was unbelievable. The only bad part about it was now its all over and I can't look at my fictionpress inbox every Saturday and see a new chapter. I loved every moment of it whether it was having to sit on the edge of my seat and wait a whole seven days for the next chapter or thoroughly enjoying the new places you would take the story. You are a talented author and I honestly cannot wait for a new story by you, whether that be soon or months from now.
Lily S.
9/24/2011 c32 1QuirkyDebutante
NICE!
I'm not saying I'm complaining but I wish you left Olivia pregnant in the epilogue.
But still, the ending gave me warm fuzzies in my stomach. :)))
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1QuirkyDebutanteNICE!
I'm not saying I'm complaining but I wish you left Olivia pregnant in the epilogue.
But still, the ending gave me warm fuzzies in my stomach. :)))
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