for At the end of the day10/6/2012 c1 
45Onearmwonder21
So very true its as if this poem is from my own heart for despite no longer loving girls it had been her laugh, her smile which had captivated me in the 1st place.
45Onearmwonder21So very true its as if this poem is from my own heart for despite no longer loving girls it had been her laugh, her smile which had captivated me in the 1st place.
3/22/2011 c1 4Iva Hartnet
Very very nice! I read it like a poem! It had the feel of a poem :) There are a couple of glitches though: 'creases' instead of what 'ceases'... But loved it! :D
You left me wishing you'd written more!
4Iva HartnetVery very nice! I read it like a poem! It had the feel of a poem :) There are a couple of glitches though: 'creases' instead of what 'ceases'... But loved it! :D
You left me wishing you'd written more!
3/3/2011 c1 15Poisoned Twinkles
You can't just fight love, no?
I have to say this is pretty short but the feelings and description are extreme. I guess that's because they're compressed in three lines. Three tasteful lines. *shiver*
Good job :)
~Twinkie
15Poisoned TwinklesYou can't just fight love, no?
I have to say this is pretty short but the feelings and description are extreme. I guess that's because they're compressed in three lines. Three tasteful lines. *shiver*
Good job :)
~Twinkie