for lacklustre3/15/2011 c1 
287Archia
I really liked this, for some unknown reason to me. I think maybe because... and I just forgot what I was going to say. Oh well, I think I'll just leave it with I liked this, before I confuse you and myself. Oh, and I thought this was beautifuk, just to add.
287ArchiaI really liked this, for some unknown reason to me. I think maybe because... and I just forgot what I was going to say. Oh well, I think I'll just leave it with I liked this, before I confuse you and myself. Oh, and I thought this was beautifuk, just to add.
3/3/2011 c1 58Inkspilled
Short and nicely written. Good word choices, it has a good impact on the reader. I like it, nice work. :)
58InkspilledShort and nicely written. Good word choices, it has a good impact on the reader. I like it, nice work. :)