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I feel this is a series of one shot poetry and not a story at all. about a darker twisted take on clichés, very creepy and sick. me likely.
I feel this is a series of one shot poetry and not a story at all. about a darker twisted take on clichés, very creepy and sick. me likely.
9/20/2012 c5 Guest
I actually enjoyed these... :0 Is that bad ? :(
I actually enjoyed these... :0 Is that bad ? :(
7/11/2012 c3 Netty
I love this so much.
I love this so much.
7/11/2012 c5 Netty
I like this a bit.
I like this a bit.
7/11/2012 c4 Netty
Why can't the female guy in the relationship be the evil, bad one?
Why can't the female guy in the relationship be the evil, bad one?
7/11/2012 c3 Netty
This is my favorite. It's so beautiful and original that I read it again and again.
This is my favorite. It's so beautiful and original that I read it again and again.
7/11/2012 c2 Guest
Capitalize the word "death".
Capitalize the word "death".
7/11/2012 c1 Netty
How interesting. (Not being sarcastic.)
How interesting. (Not being sarcastic.)
8/15/2011 c2 
12Gimme Back My Pigeon
Now these are my kind of one-shots.. especially when I'm listening to Radiohead ;)
-Chester.
12Gimme Back My PigeonNow these are my kind of one-shots.. especially when I'm listening to Radiohead ;)
-Chester.
7/7/2011 c1 1preppychiq03
i was confuse the first time i read it. then i read it again to understand. did he actually killed the girl? O_o the start was great! maybe u should add a little more details about this. :)
1preppychiq03i was confuse the first time i read it. then i read it again to understand. did he actually killed the girl? O_o the start was great! maybe u should add a little more details about this. :)
4/21/2011 c1 2Princess Euphy
So he KILLED her? This story is actually a bit confusing...maybe you can re-write it with some more details? I really like the idea of this story.
2Princess EuphySo he KILLED her? This story is actually a bit confusing...maybe you can re-write it with some more details? I really like the idea of this story.