for Days With Desmond9/18/2012 c7 Amy
I'm confused :s wasn't Michelle pregnant...? And they had already gone to Tennessee? :o
I'm confused :s wasn't Michelle pregnant...? And they had already gone to Tennessee? :o
7/12/2012 c26 
3XxLoveStonexX
Yaaayy! I loved this chapter! It was great. I'm confused on what Casey's motives are.. I guess we'll figure out. Well done (: xx
3XxLoveStonexXYaaayy! I loved this chapter! It was great. I'm confused on what Casey's motives are.. I guess we'll figure out. Well done (: xx
7/10/2012 c26 JJsMommy29
your doing an amazing job on this story and i am so hoping that Desmond doesn't die and that he gets to see his babies and also that him and Michelle get to get married but can't wait to see what you have planned for this story so update soon
your doing an amazing job on this story and i am so hoping that Desmond doesn't die and that he gets to see his babies and also that him and Michelle get to get married but can't wait to see what you have planned for this story so update soon
7/4/2012 c26 Guest
This is I-am-happy. I'm just to lazy to log in. So, where to begin? First, the chapter seemed short and REALLY fillerish. I understand that you may need to get back into it, but it seemed kind of pointless.
I can't wait for more, nonetheless!
Update soon.
This is I-am-happy. I'm just to lazy to log in. So, where to begin? First, the chapter seemed short and REALLY fillerish. I understand that you may need to get back into it, but it seemed kind of pointless.
I can't wait for more, nonetheless!
Update soon.
7/4/2012 c26 CrystalGW34
Something tells me Michelle is only fooling herself. I hope she doesn't break it off with Desmond. Glad to see you updated this. Can't wait to read more. :)
Something tells me Michelle is only fooling herself. I hope she doesn't break it off with Desmond. Glad to see you updated this. Can't wait to read more. :)
7/4/2012 c26 3Lovely Dreams
absolutely love this story, i hate casey -.- and megan's a bitch if it isnt obvious lol. anyways, pwease update soon!
3Lovely Dreamsabsolutely love this story, i hate casey -.- and megan's a bitch if it isnt obvious lol. anyways, pwease update soon!
6/26/2012 c28 Maddie
Oh I really hope you don't kill off Desmond! Please don't! Whatever you do, don't make him die! He has to see his babies grow up! :( I don't care about that other guy! He's lame! So don't do it! I'm totally in love with Desmond! He's so adorable! I seriously am pleading and begging of you, don't let him die of the cancer! :( Save him, and this story, before it's too late!
So, I just started to read whole... (Series? IDK what to call it.) and I am totally hooked! I finished The Guide For Guys like 4 days ago and now I just finished what you have for this sequel, and I gotta say that I am so stoked for the rest! Even though I know you haven't updated in a while, and people might have lost a little interest, I'm sure it'll all start back up once you've updated again! :D
Again I stress: PLEASE DON'T KILL/LET DESMOND DIE. I couldn't bear it! And neither could Michelle! :( ...And though, yes, this is your book, just... please. Please don't. Not a good idea. :(
You are an astounding writer, I'd hate to see you mess that up because you kill off the main character. It's on the list of terrible mistakes writers make. Like with Suzanne Collins when she messed with Peeta's head with the injections of Tracker Jacker venom. Not smart. Any indication as to why everyone hated Mockingjay? Yeah, you should never, EVER, mess with the main characters. It tends to piss people off, and make them hate you. It's a mistake. So please. Just don't make it.
Not trying to attack you or anything, I honestly like you, your writing, and your story, but I just thought you aught to know that it will be your downfall if you kill Demond off.
Loves from Maddie :)
Oh I really hope you don't kill off Desmond! Please don't! Whatever you do, don't make him die! He has to see his babies grow up! :( I don't care about that other guy! He's lame! So don't do it! I'm totally in love with Desmond! He's so adorable! I seriously am pleading and begging of you, don't let him die of the cancer! :( Save him, and this story, before it's too late!
So, I just started to read whole... (Series? IDK what to call it.) and I am totally hooked! I finished The Guide For Guys like 4 days ago and now I just finished what you have for this sequel, and I gotta say that I am so stoked for the rest! Even though I know you haven't updated in a while, and people might have lost a little interest, I'm sure it'll all start back up once you've updated again! :D
Again I stress: PLEASE DON'T KILL/LET DESMOND DIE. I couldn't bear it! And neither could Michelle! :( ...And though, yes, this is your book, just... please. Please don't. Not a good idea. :(
You are an astounding writer, I'd hate to see you mess that up because you kill off the main character. It's on the list of terrible mistakes writers make. Like with Suzanne Collins when she messed with Peeta's head with the injections of Tracker Jacker venom. Not smart. Any indication as to why everyone hated Mockingjay? Yeah, you should never, EVER, mess with the main characters. It tends to piss people off, and make them hate you. It's a mistake. So please. Just don't make it.
Not trying to attack you or anything, I honestly like you, your writing, and your story, but I just thought you aught to know that it will be your downfall if you kill Demond off.
Loves from Maddie :)
6/26/2012 c28 kthxbye
Are you going to update now that it's summer?(: i've been reading this story since last october and i really like it(: i hope you update(:(:
Are you going to update now that it's summer?(: i've been reading this story since last october and i really like it(: i hope you update(:(:
1/3/2012 c27 1Lili and RayRay
I love this story and really encourage you to continue writting this.
I have a question, when Desmond applied for the job, did he write none under medical conditions?
If you ever need some help for editing, you can email me. I hope it will help you with balancing out schoolwork, ect.
Lili and RayRay \(^ • ^)/
1Lili and RayRayI love this story and really encourage you to continue writting this.
I have a question, when Desmond applied for the job, did he write none under medical conditions?
If you ever need some help for editing, you can email me. I hope it will help you with balancing out schoolwork, ect.
Lili and RayRay \(^ • ^)/
12/31/2011 c28 Esperanza12
It's ok I understand. I'd love it if you oculd find time in the summer to continue, because I love this story.
It's ok I understand. I'd love it if you oculd find time in the summer to continue, because I love this story.
12/31/2011 c28 17Lady of romance world88
Honey, don't be stressed and take it easily.
Please take your time and no rush at all.
I am look forward to read your story whenever you have time and take care :) xx
17Lady of romance world88Honey, don't be stressed and take it easily.
Please take your time and no rush at all.
I am look forward to read your story whenever you have time and take care :) xx
12/31/2011 c27 Lady of romance world88
Hi there. I love it and its amazing chapter. I want more. Please update soon.
Can't wait for it.
Also can you check it out my new story whenever you have time please? And thanks
Also happy new year to you too. Take care :)
Hi there. I love it and its amazing chapter. I want more. Please update soon.
Can't wait for it.
Also can you check it out my new story whenever you have time please? And thanks
Also happy new year to you too. Take care :)