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7/26/2011 c19 CrystalGW34
I knew it. I said she would get pregnant. I have a feeling her father is going to do something stupid. Like force her to marry Desmond. Anyway, please update again just as soon as you can. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Loved the chapter. :)
7/26/2011 c18 RonieLove
i like the way yu let desmonds anger and jealousy come back into the picture again. i dont think tht there are many mistakes in the story, none tht i noticed, but if there were i bet they'd be minor. so please continue the story, its becoming very ... interesting lol
7/25/2011 c18 17Ashley4287
damn desmond you are a jealous guy! poor jay, but he kinda did deserve it i mean thank God desmond can't read his mind right? lol.i wish michelle can find a cure, highly unlikely but stilll... yay! big ch! will it be out soon?
7/25/2011 c18 7Pan's Grandaughter
Bravo! Another wonderful chapter!

I am holding you accountable for the near panic attack I had when I read the disection scene. When we had to disect things in science, I ended up histerical in the counsular's office. Nasty.

I (as usual) did not see any typos/grammar errors, but I am not sure if I would notice. But great job!

I believe I am on D.'s side. I'm still not sure if I like this J. Though I think maybe that he will come into the story alittle more when when D. kicks the bucket. Another prediction by moi.

Great chapter! Update as soon as possible!
7/25/2011 c18 6Queen.Of.Cupcakes
Desmond's being a jerk now, so right now, Jay's my favorite. They're both good for Michelle. But if Desmond really does die, then she's going to need someone to help her through his death. *cough cough*Jay*cough cough*
7/25/2011 c18 2I-am-happy
Oh. My. Gosh. So I think Desmond chill pill and Jay needs to learn not to be so touchy to another mans girl, even if he is just comforting her. Men. Sheesh. Oh well.

On another note, I found the part with the cat and all kind of hard to understand. I mean, I think you could do better.

Yet on another note, this was awesome! Loved it!
7/25/2011 c18 CrystalGW34
I hope Michelle doesn't start to have feelings for Jay. That would complicate things. I could see why Desmond was upset at the end of the chapter. He walked in to find a stranger touching his girlfriend. Any guy would be upset. Loved the chapter and I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)
7/25/2011 c18 27Princess97
Desmond was a bit harsh... but I'm still on his side :)
7/25/2011 c18 the.sky.angel
...poor .. dun dun dun... desmond got jealous.. ahahaha. lol. jay.. i feel sorry for him. anyway.., LOVE IT
7/25/2011 c18 Cheesy-romantic-writergirl
I'm 'Team Desmond' through and through, but, i think that he overreacted abit in this chapterr. Howeverr, haha, i think it plays well with dramatics(: hahaa
7/25/2011 c18 3SweetSarah2
Nice chapter, although all the organy details creeped me out. Desmond when he's being overprotective and angry is annoying, especially since Jay wasn't coming on to her or anything. If I was Michelle I'd be plenty mad at him right about now.

Anyways, good chapter and update soon!
7/24/2011 c18 1Aria Senora
The only mistake I noticed was:

"Thanks Mom."

Michelle is adressing someone, so there should be a comma after thanks:

"Thanks, Mom."

Please update soon!(:
7/24/2011 c18 5TheRiverRunsDeep
I am on her boyfriends side for now...
7/24/2011 c17 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. Its very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so sorry that I don't realise that you was update this chapter and forgive my late reply because I don't receive alert from this chapter and I usually receive few alerts. Maybe there is something wrong with my email or fictionpress because it always happen sometimes. *sigh* The songs that you always post it on this story and I tried to guess what it is from but it failed me because I have no idea who sing those songs. :( It'll be nice if you leave a quote of song and by eg 'Hush, Hush, Hush' by Pussycat doll so that it will be easily for readers to know who was sing those songs. Think about it :) OMG! I am wonder why Michelle is so upset with Desmond? I am wonder if Michelle's fall pregnant with Desmond's child? Will Michelle and Desmond marry? I am so glad that Desmond and Michelle are okay. :) OH MY! Michelle's dad is so funny and I feel sorry for Desmond. *chuckle* I am glad that Michelle and Desmond have amazing time on their holiday trip together. Yay! :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and I am off to read the next chapter now. :)
7/24/2011 c18 Esperanza12
This was great! Can't wait to see what happens next. i think something big is getting ready to happen...
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