7/26/2011 c18 RonieLove
i like the way yu let desmonds anger and jealousy come back into the picture again. i dont think tht there are many mistakes in the story, none tht i noticed, but if there were i bet they'd be minor. so please continue the story, its becoming very ... interesting lol

7/25/2011 c18 7Pan's Grandaughter
Bravo! Another wonderful chapter!

I am holding you accountable for the near panic attack I had when I read the disection scene. When we had to disect things in science, I ended up histerical in the counsular's office. Nasty.

I (as usual) did not see any typos/grammar errors, but I am not sure if I would notice. But great job!

I believe I am on D.'s side. I'm still not sure if I like this J. Though I think maybe that he will come into the story alittle more when when D. kicks the bucket. Another prediction by moi.

Great chapter! Update as soon as possible!

7/25/2011 c18 2I-am-happy
Oh. My. Gosh. So I think Desmond chill pill and Jay needs to learn not to be so touchy to another mans girl, even if he is just comforting her. Men. Sheesh. Oh well.

On another note, I found the part with the cat and all kind of hard to understand. I mean, I think you could do better.

Yet on another note, this was awesome! Loved it!

7/25/2011 c18 27Princess97
Desmond was a bit harsh... but I'm still on his side :)

7/25/2011 c18 Cheesy-romantic-writergirl
I'm 'Team Desmond' through and through, but, i think that he overreacted abit in this chapterr. Howeverr, haha, i think it plays well with dramatics(: hahaa

7/24/2011 c18 1Aria Senora
The only mistake I noticed was:

"Thanks Mom."

Michelle is adressing someone, so there should be a comma after thanks:

"Thanks, Mom."

Please update soon!(:

7/24/2011 c17 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. Its very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so sorry that I don't realise that you was update this chapter and forgive my late reply because I don't receive alert from this chapter and I usually receive few alerts. Maybe there is something wrong with my email or fictionpress because it always happen sometimes. *sigh* The songs that you always post it on this story and I tried to guess what it is from but it failed me because I have no idea who sing those songs. :( It'll be nice if you leave a quote of song and by eg 'Hush, Hush, Hush' by Pussycat doll so that it will be easily for readers to know who was sing those songs. Think about it :) OMG! I am wonder why Michelle is so upset with Desmond? I am wonder if Michelle's fall pregnant with Desmond's child? Will Michelle and Desmond marry? I am so glad that Desmond and Michelle are okay. :) OH MY! Michelle's dad is so funny and I feel sorry for Desmond. *chuckle* I am glad that Michelle and Desmond have amazing time on their holiday trip together. Yay! :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and I am off to read the next chapter now. :)