for Days With Desmond7/24/2011 c18 
2Twistedin2Delusions
I honestly don't know whose side I'm on... I feel that Desmond over-reacted and Jay is still trying to get with her even after she has left hints (her telling him she has a boyfriend) repeatedly. In conclusion I am in a neutral state.
2Twistedin2DelusionsI honestly don't know whose side I'm on... I feel that Desmond over-reacted and Jay is still trying to get with her even after she has left hints (her telling him she has a boyfriend) repeatedly. In conclusion I am in a neutral state.
7/24/2011 c17 13angellover254
Oh no! Is Michelle pregnant this time around? Great by the way...their finally back home from their little vacation! Can't wait to read the next chapter, I wonder what's gonna happen next.
13angellover254Oh no! Is Michelle pregnant this time around? Great by the way...their finally back home from their little vacation! Can't wait to read the next chapter, I wonder what's gonna happen next.
7/24/2011 c17 5TheRiverRunsDeep
I am afraid to predict anything...But What I am hoping to predict and be right about is that fact that very soon you will post a new chapter...Am i right?
5TheRiverRunsDeepI am afraid to predict anything...But What I am hoping to predict and be right about is that fact that very soon you will post a new chapter...Am i right?
7/23/2011 c17 1NeonTime
A girl is fertile for about five days of a month *counting sperm survival time*. Despite Fictionpress authors it is not complicated or likely or whatever: 5 days out of 30 a girl can get knocked up even if she isn't smart enough to take the pill or use an IUD and the guy is equally stupid in not using a condom. That is all.
Aside from the hilariously constant pregnant scares in part 2 I'm pretty much on board.
1NeonTimeA girl is fertile for about five days of a month *counting sperm survival time*. Despite Fictionpress authors it is not complicated or likely or whatever: 5 days out of 30 a girl can get knocked up even if she isn't smart enough to take the pill or use an IUD and the guy is equally stupid in not using a condom. That is all.
Aside from the hilariously constant pregnant scares in part 2 I'm pretty much on board.
7/21/2011 c17 broken-pixie
love, love, loved it! :) You really are talented at this. Please update asap.
love, love, loved it! :) You really are talented at this. Please update asap.
7/20/2011 c17 the.sky.angel
HAHAHA! awesome! hehehehe. dad being overprotective. geez... ;loke my dad. annoying. anyway. LOVE it
HAHAHA! awesome! hehehehe. dad being overprotective. geez... ;loke my dad. annoying. anyway. LOVE it
7/20/2011 c17 3SweetSarah2
Nice chapter. Didn't see any spelling mistakes but it did bug me that she seemed to 'forget' parts of what she did that night. She wasn't drunk or anything so what gives?
Anyways, nice chapter and keep writing. :)
3SweetSarah2Nice chapter. Didn't see any spelling mistakes but it did bug me that she seemed to 'forget' parts of what she did that night. She wasn't drunk or anything so what gives?
Anyways, nice chapter and keep writing. :)
7/20/2011 c17 17Ashley4287
it would be really, REALLY weird if she got pregnant -shudders- i just hope desmond lives a long time. .. .. . .
17Ashley4287it would be really, REALLY weird if she got pregnant -shudders- i just hope desmond lives a long time. .. .. . .
7/20/2011 c17 7Pan's Grandaughter
I just had a brilliant thought! That prego titanic thing could have been forshadowing! That might happen! (I'm so proud of my self, so please don't burst my bubble if I'm wrong...)
Um... I did not see any spelling/ grammar errors, but I'm not too good at that so, who knows? But you usually don't, so you're probably ok.
I'm surprised that M. flipped out when she realised what happened, but that probably would happen with someone like her.
I'm also irritated at D. He's not supposed to be doing things like this! The nurse told him not to! There is a reason he seemed sick!
Um... M. apparently was acting odd, (but to tell the truth, I was too caught up in the whole story to really notice... So bravo for the intriugue) Something's probably wrong!
Great chapter! Absolutely loved it! Please, please, please, please update asap! Bravo!
7Pan's GrandaughterI just had a brilliant thought! That prego titanic thing could have been forshadowing! That might happen! (I'm so proud of my self, so please don't burst my bubble if I'm wrong...)
Um... I did not see any spelling/ grammar errors, but I'm not too good at that so, who knows? But you usually don't, so you're probably ok.
I'm surprised that M. flipped out when she realised what happened, but that probably would happen with someone like her.
I'm also irritated at D. He's not supposed to be doing things like this! The nurse told him not to! There is a reason he seemed sick!
Um... M. apparently was acting odd, (but to tell the truth, I was too caught up in the whole story to really notice... So bravo for the intriugue) Something's probably wrong!
Great chapter! Absolutely loved it! Please, please, please, please update asap! Bravo!
7/20/2011 c17 2I-am-happy
She is PREGNANT? If she isn't I will honestly be upset. Mainly because in every story if the girl sleeps with some guy is always (and I mean in HONESTY thirteen books/stories I have read) they think she might be prago then she isn't. So if this is gonna be cliche like that I will be sad with you. *Hint*hint* Bring on the baby! :D
I liked this chapter a lot! Great one!
Emily
2I-am-happyShe is PREGNANT? If she isn't I will honestly be upset. Mainly because in every story if the girl sleeps with some guy is always (and I mean in HONESTY thirteen books/stories I have read) they think she might be prago then she isn't. So if this is gonna be cliche like that I will be sad with you. *Hint*hint* Bring on the baby! :D
I liked this chapter a lot! Great one!
Emily
7/20/2011 c17 Esperanza12
This is so awesome.
I know I've said that a lot, but its true. I am dying for the next chapter! I can tell something big is going to happen soon. :)
This is so awesome.
I know I've said that a lot, but its true. I am dying for the next chapter! I can tell something big is going to happen soon. :)
7/20/2011 c17 CrystalGW34
I have a feeling she's going to end up pregnant. If that happens more than likely her father will blow up and try to kill Desmond. Lol, I wouldn't put it past him. Loved the new chapter and so glad to see you updated. Please post again soon. Can't wait to read more. :)
I have a feeling she's going to end up pregnant. If that happens more than likely her father will blow up and try to kill Desmond. Lol, I wouldn't put it past him. Loved the new chapter and so glad to see you updated. Please post again soon. Can't wait to read more. :)