for Days With Desmond7/20/2011 c17 
2Twistedin2Delusions
I predict Michelle will really be pregnant this time... Lol. I love this story and I can't wait until the next update. :)
2Twistedin2DelusionsI predict Michelle will really be pregnant this time... Lol. I love this story and I can't wait until the next update. :)
7/12/2011 c16 2I-am-happy
They had sex?
Okay, so I loved everything up until that part. Why in every story I like have they ended up sleeping together? Oh well.
Loving it anyway!
2I-am-happyThey had sex?
Okay, so I loved everything up until that part. Why in every story I like have they ended up sleeping together? Oh well.
Loving it anyway!
7/12/2011 c13 I-am-happy
I loved this chapter! :D But, I found one flaw in it.
***She fidgeted as she tried to recall some. Poor girl. "Maintain body temperature, breathing, muscle activities, both voluntary and involuntary…"***
- Its the spine the controls involuntary movements. Life if you touch a hot pan for example. If you do the nerve endings in your spine will tell your body that it is too hot and you will pull away. After if will send what you did to the brain. So really, the brain dose not control involuntary things. You know?
Other than that, I loved it! Next chapter here I come!
:)
Emily
I loved this chapter! :D But, I found one flaw in it.
***She fidgeted as she tried to recall some. Poor girl. "Maintain body temperature, breathing, muscle activities, both voluntary and involuntary…"***
- Its the spine the controls involuntary movements. Life if you touch a hot pan for example. If you do the nerve endings in your spine will tell your body that it is too hot and you will pull away. After if will send what you did to the brain. So really, the brain dose not control involuntary things. You know?
Other than that, I loved it! Next chapter here I come!
:)
Emily
7/12/2011 c16 3Brightheart
i really loved this chapter. it was so descriptive and cute. can't wait for more.
3Brighthearti really loved this chapter. it was so descriptive and cute. can't wait for more.
7/11/2011 c16 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I notice that you change the rate from T to M and its fine with me. :) I am so confusing about the whole story of Titantic because the woman and her fiancè were survived from the ship except for her lover who has died that time so I saw it on the movie plus I already read the story of Titantic but I forget the name of the author so I am so confusing that in this chapter that she is pregnant because in the movie, she wasn't and I am not sure if the book have mention about her. Arrgh! I hate it when movies leave the truths out and change it from the books. Stupid movies! :( So in this chapter is the truth about titantic? The reason why the ship has sink because the ship has crush to the north pole that the ship only have few life boats thats time. Its very sad. :( I am glad that Michelle and Desmond enjoy their trip together. Yay! :D Aww... Michelle and Desmond slept together. Thats so cute and hot. :) It'll be nice if you add bit more details about their lovemaking. Its ok if you don't want to write a lovdmaking scenes and I understand that. :) Hurry update soon and keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I notice that you change the rate from T to M and its fine with me. :) I am so confusing about the whole story of Titantic because the woman and her fiancè were survived from the ship except for her lover who has died that time so I saw it on the movie plus I already read the story of Titantic but I forget the name of the author so I am so confusing that in this chapter that she is pregnant because in the movie, she wasn't and I am not sure if the book have mention about her. Arrgh! I hate it when movies leave the truths out and change it from the books. Stupid movies! :( So in this chapter is the truth about titantic? The reason why the ship has sink because the ship has crush to the north pole that the ship only have few life boats thats time. Its very sad. :( I am glad that Michelle and Desmond enjoy their trip together. Yay! :D Aww... Michelle and Desmond slept together. Thats so cute and hot. :) It'll be nice if you add bit more details about their lovemaking. Its ok if you don't want to write a lovdmaking scenes and I understand that. :) Hurry update soon and keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :)
7/11/2011 c16 13angellover254
Awesome chapter! I really hope the boarding passes wasn't a sign that he's going to die...cuz I really don't want to see that coming at all! Kissing in the rain...lol love it...can't wait until the next chapter! Update soon?
13angellover254Awesome chapter! I really hope the boarding passes wasn't a sign that he's going to die...cuz I really don't want to see that coming at all! Kissing in the rain...lol love it...can't wait until the next chapter! Update soon?
7/11/2011 c16 CrystalGW34
The doctor said no sex. Not good for the poor heart. Anyway, I enjoy all things that has to do with the Titanic and was thrilled when I discovered you wrote a little about it. Anyway, loved the chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Update soon. :)
The doctor said no sex. Not good for the poor heart. Anyway, I enjoy all things that has to do with the Titanic and was thrilled when I discovered you wrote a little about it. Anyway, loved the chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Update soon. :)
7/10/2011 c16 7Pan's Grandaughter
I am very sorry that I have not been able to review your past couple chapters; I was in Tennesse (oh, irony...) and then I was shipped off to take care of my grandmother... So I'm finally getting around to reviewing. I try to make it rounded and long.
So, I see you changed your rating. Probably good idea. I knew it would come to this...
That guy whats his name that shows up at university I'm thinking is if and/or when D. kicks the bucket, possibly this dude will come into the story a little more. I'm not sure I like him though.
I did not see any spelling/grammar errors, but I could be wrong. But bravo any way.
The Titanic: Yes, there were not enough life boats for the passengers, but plenty for British safety code. Even scarier.
Ummm... Just a thought of mine, but if Desmond only had a year to live aprox. why isn't he wallowing in pain in hospital?
Just a question of mine: was the end of this chapter awkward to write? Just wondering.
Great job on chapter 16, and I can't wait to read more! Great job and I hope this makes up for me never updating and not reviewing the past couple chapters, even though you are always nice enough to review mine!
7Pan's GrandaughterI am very sorry that I have not been able to review your past couple chapters; I was in Tennesse (oh, irony...) and then I was shipped off to take care of my grandmother... So I'm finally getting around to reviewing. I try to make it rounded and long.
So, I see you changed your rating. Probably good idea. I knew it would come to this...
That guy whats his name that shows up at university I'm thinking is if and/or when D. kicks the bucket, possibly this dude will come into the story a little more. I'm not sure I like him though.
I did not see any spelling/grammar errors, but I could be wrong. But bravo any way.
The Titanic: Yes, there were not enough life boats for the passengers, but plenty for British safety code. Even scarier.
Ummm... Just a thought of mine, but if Desmond only had a year to live aprox. why isn't he wallowing in pain in hospital?
Just a question of mine: was the end of this chapter awkward to write? Just wondering.
Great job on chapter 16, and I can't wait to read more! Great job and I hope this makes up for me never updating and not reviewing the past couple chapters, even though you are always nice enough to review mine!
7/6/2011 c15 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I loved it. :) Aww Desmond hire a car for the trip and took Michelle to the supermarket then to their cabin where they are stay for one week. How cute. :) I feel sorry that Desmond got lost. Poor Desmond. :( I understand why Michelle refuse to share a bed with Desmond because she's afraid that it will lead to lovemaking. What a smart girl Michelle is. :) I love go - kart and car racing. Its one of my favourite game and in park too. :) Oh my! Desmond got lost twice in this chapter. Poor Desmond. :( Aww Desmond and Michelle danced all night. Its so romantic, cute and adornable magic night for two couples who are in love. *sigh in dreamily* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I loved it. And please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D By the way, I am so so sorry to keep you waiting so long for me to update my chapters for my story and I have my reasons for being delay for awhile so check out my new story thats coming up this week soon. :) And check out the new chapter of my story whenever you have time to read it. Hope that you'll forgive me for being delay. -hugs-
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I loved it. :) Aww Desmond hire a car for the trip and took Michelle to the supermarket then to their cabin where they are stay for one week. How cute. :) I feel sorry that Desmond got lost. Poor Desmond. :( I understand why Michelle refuse to share a bed with Desmond because she's afraid that it will lead to lovemaking. What a smart girl Michelle is. :) I love go - kart and car racing. Its one of my favourite game and in park too. :) Oh my! Desmond got lost twice in this chapter. Poor Desmond. :( Aww Desmond and Michelle danced all night. Its so romantic, cute and adornable magic night for two couples who are in love. *sigh in dreamily* Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I loved it. And please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D By the way, I am so so sorry to keep you waiting so long for me to update my chapters for my story and I have my reasons for being delay for awhile so check out my new story thats coming up this week soon. :) And check out the new chapter of my story whenever you have time to read it. Hope that you'll forgive me for being delay. -hugs-
7/3/2011 c15 13angellover254
Lol...They got lost, and Desmond didn't want to admit it that they lost:]...and yay! Michelle won the race...I knew she would! Great chapter, and can't wait for the next, update soon please:]
13angellover254Lol...They got lost, and Desmond didn't want to admit it that they lost:]...and yay! Michelle won the race...I knew she would! Great chapter, and can't wait for the next, update soon please:]