for Days With Desmond6/30/2011 c15 
3Wordsmith49
I love you.
I seriously love you.
I couldn't live without this story.
Keep writing =D
3Wordsmith49I love you.
I seriously love you.
I couldn't live without this story.
Keep writing =D
6/29/2011 c15 1Spring Jasmine Flower
OH MY GOD! THAT IS JUST TOO SWEET! I love the go-kart part!So awesome! I love the ending where they danced the night away! So beautiful... Update soon! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
1Spring Jasmine FlowerOH MY GOD! THAT IS JUST TOO SWEET! I love the go-kart part!So awesome! I love the ending where they danced the night away! So beautiful... Update soon! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
6/29/2011 c15 CrystalGW34
It's just like a guy to not want to stop and ask for directions or admit he's lost. Anyway, the chapter was well worth the wait. Can't wait to read the next one. Update soon. :)
It's just like a guy to not want to stop and ask for directions or admit he's lost. Anyway, the chapter was well worth the wait. Can't wait to read the next one. Update soon. :)
6/29/2011 c15 Admins Pls Delete Me
Told ya she'd win! Haha
I LOVE go-karting! But I prefer atving (as you might be able to tell by my penname)
Awesome chapter, once again! Epic go-kart race! Update soon please!
Told ya she'd win! Haha
I LOVE go-karting! But I prefer atving (as you might be able to tell by my penname)
Awesome chapter, once again! Epic go-kart race! Update soon please!
6/27/2011 c14 2Soonafter100
I really liked it and was surprised by Jay showing up, but I liked it, like always!
2Soonafter100I really liked it and was surprised by Jay showing up, but I liked it, like always!
6/24/2011 c14 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it:)
It's very sweet that you ask questions in the A/N for readers to give their opinions but it's best if you don't ask questions too much otherwise you might spoilt this story so think about it. I am just being try to help you out that's all and I am just being honest with you. :)
Wow! Tennessee sound so interesting. :) I am wonder where is Tennessee is? :S
I am glad to see that Desmond and Michelle are making their plans together got tourist around Tennessee. Yay! :D
Aww Desmond and Michelle are play spy game. How cute:D
OMG! Wait a minute! I am so confusing about college. I thought american students finish high school then they goes to college around eighteen. And Michelle doesn't say that she's enrol in college. :S can you explain to me clearly? Thanks. Sorry! *embarrassment*
Aww... I am so sorry to hear that Jay lost his uncle it's must be tough for Jay and his family to get through the mourn period. Poor Jay. :(
I wonder how Jay's uncle die? I wonder why Michelle is kept secrets from Edesmond for?
I am glad to hear that Michelle and Desmond arrived at Tennessee safely. Yay! :D
Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have a time to update soon. Don't stop writing. :D Its amazing story and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. : )
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it:)
It's very sweet that you ask questions in the A/N for readers to give their opinions but it's best if you don't ask questions too much otherwise you might spoilt this story so think about it. I am just being try to help you out that's all and I am just being honest with you. :)
Wow! Tennessee sound so interesting. :) I am wonder where is Tennessee is? :S
I am glad to see that Desmond and Michelle are making their plans together got tourist around Tennessee. Yay! :D
Aww Desmond and Michelle are play spy game. How cute:D
OMG! Wait a minute! I am so confusing about college. I thought american students finish high school then they goes to college around eighteen. And Michelle doesn't say that she's enrol in college. :S can you explain to me clearly? Thanks. Sorry! *embarrassment*
Aww... I am so sorry to hear that Jay lost his uncle it's must be tough for Jay and his family to get through the mourn period. Poor Jay. :(
I wonder how Jay's uncle die? I wonder why Michelle is kept secrets from Edesmond for?
I am glad to hear that Michelle and Desmond arrived at Tennessee safely. Yay! :D
Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have a time to update soon. Don't stop writing. :D Its amazing story and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. : )
6/19/2011 c14 1EpicGirl42
Love the long chap! :) I have an uneasy feeling about Jay...I know to have a plot there must be conflict, but I don't want him ruining Michelle and Desmond's vacation! I think he will have a larger role in future chapters, though. I was thinking you would do at least two chapters for the vacay, maybe even three, depending on how long you make them. Anywho, I am so glad you updated! :) Good chapter! Best of luck! ~Mia(:
1EpicGirl42Love the long chap! :) I have an uneasy feeling about Jay...I know to have a plot there must be conflict, but I don't want him ruining Michelle and Desmond's vacation! I think he will have a larger role in future chapters, though. I was thinking you would do at least two chapters for the vacay, maybe even three, depending on how long you make them. Anywho, I am so glad you updated! :) Good chapter! Best of luck! ~Mia(:
6/19/2011 c14 1Spring Jasmine Flower
Wow...Desmond somewhat jealous of Jay? LOL...Ohhh this gotta be gud! Am so excited to see what happens in Tennessee? Sounds like fun trip for them both! Update soon!
1Spring Jasmine FlowerWow...Desmond somewhat jealous of Jay? LOL...Ohhh this gotta be gud! Am so excited to see what happens in Tennessee? Sounds like fun trip for them both! Update soon!
6/17/2011 c14 3SweetSarah2
Liked the chapter. Got a feeling Jay's going to cause a fuss at some point or another. What was the name of the song at the start of the chapter?
Anyways, nice chapter as always. ;)
3SweetSarah2Liked the chapter. Got a feeling Jay's going to cause a fuss at some point or another. What was the name of the song at the start of the chapter?
Anyways, nice chapter as always. ;)
6/17/2011 c14 13angellover254
Yes this super long chapter did make the long wait worth it...looks like Jay is back...mmhmm I bet he's gonna appear again during their trip...I think you should do at least two chapters on their vacation, because I want to read lots of chapter on their vacation, it seem interesting! Update soon please?
13angellover254Yes this super long chapter did make the long wait worth it...looks like Jay is back...mmhmm I bet he's gonna appear again during their trip...I think you should do at least two chapters on their vacation, because I want to read lots of chapter on their vacation, it seem interesting! Update soon please?
6/17/2011 c14 CrystalGW34
Enjoyed the chapter as always. So glad her father's on board with the trip. I hope everything goes well and nothing bad happens to them while their on their vacation. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)
Enjoyed the chapter as always. So glad her father's on board with the trip. I hope everything goes well and nothing bad happens to them while their on their vacation. Can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)