
5/29/2011 c8 CrystalGW34
I think I would have thrown up too. I hate rides and heights. Off to read more.
I think I would have thrown up too. I hate rides and heights. Off to read more.
5/29/2011 c7 CrystalGW34
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I'd comment more on it, but I'm anxious to get to the next chapter.
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I'd comment more on it, but I'm anxious to get to the next chapter.
5/29/2011 c6 CrystalGW34
Loved the chapter, especially the part where Desmond got Megan and Casey thrown out of the movie.
Loved the chapter, especially the part where Desmond got Megan and Casey thrown out of the movie.
5/29/2011 c5 CrystalGW34
I hope he was able to convince her of his love. Anyway, can't wait to read about their date. Off to read that now. :)
I hope he was able to convince her of his love. Anyway, can't wait to read about their date. Off to read that now. :)
5/29/2011 c3 CrystalGW34
Her nightmare was just that, a nightmare. At leasr I hope it was. Nice chapter. :)
Her nightmare was just that, a nightmare. At leasr I hope it was. Nice chapter. :)
5/28/2011 c2 CrystalGW34
I hate hate Megan. I know I said that in the last story, but I just had to say it again. Loved the ending. :)
I hate hate Megan. I know I said that in the last story, but I just had to say it again. Loved the ending. :)
5/28/2011 c1 CrystalGW34
I thought I would go ahead and start reading the sequel. I couldn't wait until tomorrow. :) I'm looking forward to reading this.
I thought I would go ahead and start reading the sequel. I couldn't wait until tomorrow. :) I'm looking forward to reading this.
5/27/2011 c12
7E.Nelson
Ahhh! Cliffhanger! :O I wanna know what she's gonna announce! O.O Keep up the good work, and update soon?
Twas an amazing chapter, by the way :D

Ahhh! Cliffhanger! :O I wanna know what she's gonna announce! O.O Keep up the good work, and update soon?
Twas an amazing chapter, by the way :D
5/26/2011 c12 pro.at.being.a.ninga3
Loved this chapter, but it is quite obvious that she isn't pregnant. Great writing, keep it up ;)
- pro.at.being.a.ninja.
Loved this chapter, but it is quite obvious that she isn't pregnant. Great writing, keep it up ;)
- pro.at.being.a.ninja.
5/25/2011 c12
3Wordsmith49
I. Have. To. Know. What. Happens.
WHAT DOES SHE SAY.
I. HAVE. TO. KNOW.
But I don't get why Desmond thinks she's pregnant... they never even had... shenanigans...
Update soon! ♥

I. Have. To. Know. What. Happens.
WHAT DOES SHE SAY.
I. HAVE. TO. KNOW.
But I don't get why Desmond thinks she's pregnant... they never even had... shenanigans...
Update soon! ♥
5/25/2011 c12
13angellover254
Are you kidding me? You just had to end it like that? Now I really reallly really want to know what Michelle was going to say! Please Update Soon:]

Are you kidding me? You just had to end it like that? Now I really reallly really want to know what Michelle was going to say! Please Update Soon:]
5/23/2011 c12
3SweetSarah2
Nice piece. Please update faster though.
Can I just say, how could Michelle possibly be pregnant?
They've never done !it! that I've noticed. Unless you missed something out?
Could you just say whether or not they've - - - or not. I'm REALLY confused.
But anyways, good chapter. Can't wait til the next one.
=D

Nice piece. Please update faster though.
Can I just say, how could Michelle possibly be pregnant?
They've never done !it! that I've noticed. Unless you missed something out?
Could you just say whether or not they've - - - or not. I'm REALLY confused.
But anyways, good chapter. Can't wait til the next one.
=D
5/23/2011 c12
2I-am-happy
So you end there? You just HAVE to end there? Not nice, my dear. Not nice at all. I can't wait for another chapter! And I just can't wait for what Michelle has to say! Can you please update sooner?
Emily

So you end there? You just HAVE to end there? Not nice, my dear. Not nice at all. I can't wait for another chapter! And I just can't wait for what Michelle has to say! Can you please update sooner?
Emily
5/23/2011 c12
3Brightheart
interesting, but it is a cliffhanger. not good. can't wait till the next chapter.

interesting, but it is a cliffhanger. not good. can't wait till the next chapter.