for Days With Desmond5/23/2011 c12 
6Queen.Of.Cupcakes
...you suck. I mean, seriously? A cliffhanger like that! YOU CAN'T DO THAT WITHOUT ENDING THE SUSPENSE REALLY FAST.
The chapter was very descriptive and the sentences flowed. I loved it :D
6Queen.Of.Cupcakes...you suck. I mean, seriously? A cliffhanger like that! YOU CAN'T DO THAT WITHOUT ENDING THE SUSPENSE REALLY FAST.
The chapter was very descriptive and the sentences flowed. I loved it :D
5/23/2011 c12 7Pan's Grandaughter
Great descriptions! -That really stuck out
Oh and there are somethings I was wondering about:
1.Didn't Des. say that there was no possible chance that he could be a father? Or did I just dream that up? Becuase it does not seem like Michelle would be that sort of person.
2. Why don't their parents call each other by their first names? It seems odd that they do not.
Anyways, awsome chapter! Good luck on your exams, and I hope you are coping well these days; Update soon!
7Pan's GrandaughterGreat descriptions! -That really stuck out
Oh and there are somethings I was wondering about:
1.Didn't Des. say that there was no possible chance that he could be a father? Or did I just dream that up? Becuase it does not seem like Michelle would be that sort of person.
2. Why don't their parents call each other by their first names? It seems odd that they do not.
Anyways, awsome chapter! Good luck on your exams, and I hope you are coping well these days; Update soon!
5/23/2011 c12 the.sky.angel
OMG! I HATE U! nah jokes. got i was sooooo into it. then... u stop it. ! (sigh) gonna wait for the next chapter then. Well until next time!
OMG! I HATE U! nah jokes. got i was sooooo into it. then... u stop it. ! (sigh) gonna wait for the next chapter then. Well until next time!
5/22/2011 c12 2Soonafter100
I don't think she is pregnant, honestly...can't wait for the next chapter! Please Post soon, love it like always!
2Soonafter100I don't think she is pregnant, honestly...can't wait for the next chapter! Please Post soon, love it like always!
5/22/2011 c12 Admins Pls Delete Me
She...she isn't pregnant...is she? Gah, you just HAD to leave us with a cliffhanger, didn't you?
So, seriously, you should update very soon! You'd make me one happy person if you did, so do it please! I really don't like cliffhangers (although I love writing them (I'm such a contradiction! What's the expression? Walking contradiction? (I'm sure I have that wrong))), but they do keep the reader's attention (more like having the reader's practically pull their hair out in guessing what will happen). Oh, sorry, I've been rambling on and on! (it happens a lot) I'll shut up now.
GREAT CHAPTER!
She...she isn't pregnant...is she? Gah, you just HAD to leave us with a cliffhanger, didn't you?
So, seriously, you should update very soon! You'd make me one happy person if you did, so do it please! I really don't like cliffhangers (although I love writing them (I'm such a contradiction! What's the expression? Walking contradiction? (I'm sure I have that wrong))), but they do keep the reader's attention (more like having the reader's practically pull their hair out in guessing what will happen). Oh, sorry, I've been rambling on and on! (it happens a lot) I'll shut up now.
GREAT CHAPTER!
5/22/2011 c12 2LDS Dreamer
Do you know how nervous I am? The suspense is KILLING me. Not literally but you know what I mean. I need to know what happens!
2LDS DreamerDo you know how nervous I am? The suspense is KILLING me. Not literally but you know what I mean. I need to know what happens!
5/10/2011 c11 1EpicGirl42
Love it! Can't wait! :) have a wonderful beautiful joyous awesome epical day! Jesus loves you! -Mia :)
1EpicGirl42Love it! Can't wait! :) have a wonderful beautiful joyous awesome epical day! Jesus loves you! -Mia :)
5/9/2011 c11 2I-am-happy
AMAZING x 1,0,0! Really awesome chapter! I can't wait till the next chapter!
-Happy
PS- I'm almost done the chapter (finally!)
2I-am-happyAMAZING x 1,0,0! Really awesome chapter! I can't wait till the next chapter!
-Happy
PS- I'm almost done the chapter (finally!)
5/8/2011 c11 7Pan's Grandaughter
You don't seem too out of practice, I actually believe that this is one of your best written in terms of the conversation.
Usually conversation in these circumstances seems too forced, like a conversation like that would never happen. But these seemed extraordinarily believable. Great job!
Thank you so much for reviewing each of my chapters:) I know you were busy and all, but thank you so much for your support!
Great chapter! I can't wait until your next ones come for both of your stories!
7Pan's GrandaughterYou don't seem too out of practice, I actually believe that this is one of your best written in terms of the conversation.
Usually conversation in these circumstances seems too forced, like a conversation like that would never happen. But these seemed extraordinarily believable. Great job!
Thank you so much for reviewing each of my chapters:) I know you were busy and all, but thank you so much for your support!
Great chapter! I can't wait until your next ones come for both of your stories!
5/8/2011 c11 2Soonafter100
Nice chapter and sorry to here about your house I have had that happen to me too! Hope you can post soon!
2Soonafter100Nice chapter and sorry to here about your house I have had that happen to me too! Hope you can post soon!