
12/31/2011 c25
17Lady of romance world88
Hi there. I am so sorry for not read your stories very often because i am so busy with my job and other things so now i decide to wrie again .
Also i already post new story as well so i don't want you to think that i forget about my other two. And i will keep writing on those four stories too.
And i really love this chater. And ireally so sorry for it...
Hope that you will forgive me for not read your stories and for late delay updated.
And happy new year to you :) xx

Hi there. I am so sorry for not read your stories very often because i am so busy with my job and other things so now i decide to wrie again .
Also i already post new story as well so i don't want you to think that i forget about my other two. And i will keep writing on those four stories too.
And i really love this chater. And ireally so sorry for it...
Hope that you will forgive me for not read your stories and for late delay updated.
And happy new year to you :) xx
12/30/2011 c1
10rougette
This is a really good start to the story! I didn't read the first book yet and I really don't have the time to right now, but I'm planning on reading it after this one :) I can't wait to read the next chapter!

This is a really good start to the story! I didn't read the first book yet and I really don't have the time to right now, but I'm planning on reading it after this one :) I can't wait to read the next chapter!
12/26/2011 c24
1Idontgiveacare
I hope u hve a wonderful life with him!
you do not know how much i love this story, or actually maybe u do ;)

I hope u hve a wonderful life with him!
you do not know how much i love this story, or actually maybe u do ;)
12/26/2011 c21 Idontgiveacare
Help, Im about to have a heart attck! Call 911!
I knew this wasnt good. I wonder if Desmond could live a little bit longer. loved the ch tho
Help, Im about to have a heart attck! Call 911!
I knew this wasnt good. I wonder if Desmond could live a little bit longer. loved the ch tho
12/26/2011 c20 Idontgiveacare
Oh wow I still can't get over that she's having a baby, but now TWO babies! AHHHHH too much drama! lol, i like this story
Oh wow I still can't get over that she's having a baby, but now TWO babies! AHHHHH too much drama! lol, i like this story
12/26/2011 c28 broken-pixie
We understand. Just please, don't give up on this story - it truely IS AMAZING! And please, don't forget about it. Hope to see an update by summer :) Now I can't wait for summer to get here, lol.
We understand. Just please, don't give up on this story - it truely IS AMAZING! And please, don't forget about it. Hope to see an update by summer :) Now I can't wait for summer to get here, lol.
12/26/2011 c12 Idontgiveacare
I warn you this might be a long review, i have so much stuff to say!
I stood there a few moments longer, staring blankly at the kitchen table like an idiot. "Michelle? How much longer are you gonna stare at the table? It's not going to move until you look away." my mother's teasing voice carried clearly through the air. I blinked a few times, snapping out of it.
hahahaha funny!
"Where the heck did I put the kiwis?" my mom yelled in frustration as she threw random vegetables out of the fridge. I stood a few feet away, in the safety zone. "Mom," I tried to explain to her. "They're not in here, I swear!" she exclaimed. She put a hand to her head. "I'm going senile, that's what it is, must be that med-" "Mom!" She looked up at me, as if she was just realizing I was there. "They're still in the grocery bag." I gestured to the brown paper bag on the table. "You just got home from the store." "Oh. Oh, uh, thank you." she slowly rose from her knees and went over to the groceries. She busied herself with putting away the rest of the things she bought. It was a wonder sometimes how she got through the day without me.
hahahahahahhahahaha i died from laughing reading that part!
Desmond needs to calm down, she's not pregnant!
"Desmond and I are officially couples"...or prob. something like that is what michelle's gonna say.
I warn you this might be a long review, i have so much stuff to say!
I stood there a few moments longer, staring blankly at the kitchen table like an idiot. "Michelle? How much longer are you gonna stare at the table? It's not going to move until you look away." my mother's teasing voice carried clearly through the air. I blinked a few times, snapping out of it.
hahahaha funny!
"Where the heck did I put the kiwis?" my mom yelled in frustration as she threw random vegetables out of the fridge. I stood a few feet away, in the safety zone. "Mom," I tried to explain to her. "They're not in here, I swear!" she exclaimed. She put a hand to her head. "I'm going senile, that's what it is, must be that med-" "Mom!" She looked up at me, as if she was just realizing I was there. "They're still in the grocery bag." I gestured to the brown paper bag on the table. "You just got home from the store." "Oh. Oh, uh, thank you." she slowly rose from her knees and went over to the groceries. She busied herself with putting away the rest of the things she bought. It was a wonder sometimes how she got through the day without me.
hahahahahahhahahaha i died from laughing reading that part!
Desmond needs to calm down, she's not pregnant!
"Desmond and I are officially couples"...or prob. something like that is what michelle's gonna say.
12/26/2011 c11 Idontgiveacare
I stopped in mid-bite and almost choked on the gooey cheese. I had forgotten that I hadn't told my mother what had happened at King's Island. She didn't know about the whole scare of Michelle almost being...well, you know.
She rushed to my side and rubbed my back. I coughed a few times and thirstily gulped my cup of water.
Hahahahahahaha that just sounded so funny! (the choking part I mean, not the pregnant part)
I started laughing out loud and sis goes like "whats so funny? stop laughing!"
I stopped in mid-bite and almost choked on the gooey cheese. I had forgotten that I hadn't told my mother what had happened at King's Island. She didn't know about the whole scare of Michelle almost being...well, you know.
She rushed to my side and rubbed my back. I coughed a few times and thirstily gulped my cup of water.
Hahahahahahaha that just sounded so funny! (the choking part I mean, not the pregnant part)
I started laughing out loud and sis goes like "whats so funny? stop laughing!"
12/26/2011 c8 Idontgiveacare
hahahahahahahahaha they way i read "hooolllllyyyy ccccrrraaaaapp!" just made me laugh really loud. is Michelle ok?
hahahahahahahahaha they way i read "hooolllllyyyy ccccrrraaaaapp!" just made me laugh really loud. is Michelle ok?
12/26/2011 c4 Idontgiveacare
Benevolent...This can help you for your vocab and my spelling =) I have to practice for the spelling bee
Benevolent...This can help you for your vocab and my spelling =) I have to practice for the spelling bee
12/25/2011 c28 Idontgiveacare
Nooo I just started this story! you cant put it on hiatus! well u can but not until summer! just until late jan? feb? mar?
Nooo I just started this story! you cant put it on hiatus! well u can but not until summer! just until late jan? feb? mar?