for Days With Desmond3/19/2011 c5 Aamna
Wow. That was a very moving chapter... especially now that we know Desmond has MOOBS! :P Sorry... that was a very weird part, it needed to be mentioned in this review. Anywho... I really want to hear about their date =D, and we must pray that Megan doesn't show up and ruin their love. Umm... I have a request for a song at the beginning of a chapter Everything by Neverest, please :)
Wow. That was a very moving chapter... especially now that we know Desmond has MOOBS! :P Sorry... that was a very weird part, it needed to be mentioned in this review. Anywho... I really want to hear about their date =D, and we must pray that Megan doesn't show up and ruin their love. Umm... I have a request for a song at the beginning of a chapter Everything by Neverest, please :)
3/19/2011 c5 
1Spring Jasmine Flower
Wow...i almost cried...almost...awesome chapter! Update soon plz! This story is getting gud! can't wait to see what will happen next
1Spring Jasmine FlowerWow...i almost cried...almost...awesome chapter! Update soon plz! This story is getting gud! can't wait to see what will happen next
3/19/2011 c5 7E.Nelson
"I really didn't to tell him what had been on my mind the past few days." I think you meant "I really didn't want to tell him..."
Okay, when she said she was thinking about the daisy and after it, well I'm reading as I'm reviewing, I think I might be getting a little soft here O.o
Doesn't matter if it was short, "quality over quantity" is that what they say? Well, if so, Amazing chapter
7E.Nelson"I really didn't to tell him what had been on my mind the past few days." I think you meant "I really didn't want to tell him..."
Okay, when she said she was thinking about the daisy and after it, well I'm reading as I'm reviewing, I think I might be getting a little soft here O.o
Doesn't matter if it was short, "quality over quantity" is that what they say? Well, if so, Amazing chapter
3/19/2011 c5 27Princess97
Awesome chapter but... doesn't she realize that all this questioning is going to hurt his heart and make him die even faster?
27Princess97Awesome chapter but... doesn't she realize that all this questioning is going to hurt his heart and make him die even faster?
3/18/2011 c5 4Golden Waves
This is one amazing story, I'm also talking about the first one. I cried when I read the last chapter, :'(
Your an amazing and talented writer and I can't wait for more. :)
Anna
4Golden WavesThis is one amazing story, I'm also talking about the first one. I cried when I read the last chapter, :'(
Your an amazing and talented writer and I can't wait for more. :)
Anna
3/16/2011 c4 7MarcyB3ar
"YOU'RE A DONKEY'S BUTT"
IT'S A KEEPER!
lol
seriously i was d-y-ing with laughter and it's prob so wrong to say that i enjoyed every word of Casey's butt whooping...every word...but who cares cuz the truth of the matter is i did^_^
why is Michelle being so difficult?
a mean are we girls really that difficult?
i seriously have to ask my babe that one...then again i don't think i really want to know...
*sigh
anyway back to the chapter...what more can i say except I LOVED IT...and i cant say i didn't expect Michelle to act the way she did in the end...gotta give it to you dear B-E-A-UTIFULLY ORCHESTRATED
[THUMBS UP]
not so patiently waiting [just being honest O_o] for the next chapter
~MarciaElaine
7MarcyB3ar"YOU'RE A DONKEY'S BUTT"
IT'S A KEEPER!
lol
seriously i was d-y-ing with laughter and it's prob so wrong to say that i enjoyed every word of Casey's butt whooping...every word...but who cares cuz the truth of the matter is i did^_^
why is Michelle being so difficult?
a mean are we girls really that difficult?
i seriously have to ask my babe that one...then again i don't think i really want to know...
*sigh
anyway back to the chapter...what more can i say except I LOVED IT...and i cant say i didn't expect Michelle to act the way she did in the end...gotta give it to you dear B-E-A-UTIFULLY ORCHESTRATED
[THUMBS UP]
not so patiently waiting [just being honest O_o] for the next chapter
~MarciaElaine
3/16/2011 c3 MarcyB3ar
would you plz stop tormenting that poor girl with those dreams LOL
but seriously why is Michelle so insecure?
well...considering her and Desmond's current and past situations i guess its understandable but gez she really needs to give the worrying a break unless she wants to die of heart failure...
or was that the plan?
hm[thoughtful face]
anyways ON WITH MY READING!
and you dear mademoiselle ON WITH THE WRITING!
lol
tata ~MarciaElaine
would you plz stop tormenting that poor girl with those dreams LOL
but seriously why is Michelle so insecure?
well...considering her and Desmond's current and past situations i guess its understandable but gez she really needs to give the worrying a break unless she wants to die of heart failure...
or was that the plan?
hm[thoughtful face]
anyways ON WITH MY READING!
and you dear mademoiselle ON WITH THE WRITING!
lol
tata ~MarciaElaine
3/16/2011 c2 MarcyB3ar
ONCE AGAIN I HAVE TO COMMEND YOU ON A JOB WELL DONE
not too sappy, not too confrontational you managed to strike the right chord in between with just the right balance...
...gotta get back to reading the other two chapters ^_^
toodles ~MarciaElaine
ONCE AGAIN I HAVE TO COMMEND YOU ON A JOB WELL DONE
not too sappy, not too confrontational you managed to strike the right chord in between with just the right balance...
...gotta get back to reading the other two chapters ^_^
toodles ~MarciaElaine
3/16/2011 c1 MarcyB3ar
*sigh* i jus finished reading THE GUIDE FOR GUYS...cant say i didnt see the whole Desmond having cancer as well thing coming
that was sad but i does make for a real read [if you get what i'm trying to say]
any ways i loved it and i was desperate to start reading the sequel and i have to commend you that im not dissapointed
^_^
i would love to join the "pack" and say i dont want Desmond to die [i really dont @_@] but i like my stories to be kept as real as possible...then there's always the conflicting emotion of wanting That happy ending that seems to remain elusive in reallity...~confused~
anywho...do what you do best ^_^ and keep writing
^_^
~MarciaElaine
*sigh* i jus finished reading THE GUIDE FOR GUYS...cant say i didnt see the whole Desmond having cancer as well thing coming
that was sad but i does make for a real read [if you get what i'm trying to say]
any ways i loved it and i was desperate to start reading the sequel and i have to commend you that im not dissapointed
^_^
i would love to join the "pack" and say i dont want Desmond to die [i really dont @_@] but i like my stories to be kept as real as possible...then there's always the conflicting emotion of wanting That happy ending that seems to remain elusive in reallity...~confused~
anywho...do what you do best ^_^ and keep writing
^_^
~MarciaElaine
3/16/2011 c4 3Wordsmith49
*screams*
THEY FOUGHT! THAT WAS SO EPIC! OH MY TURTLES THAT WAS AWSYM!
I wish they had beaten up Megan too. She deserved it. And I thought Casey was a Christian! He's got some issuez.
ANYWAY. I loved the chapter. And I learned a new vocabulary word, so that just makes it even better.
Update soon!
~Wordsmith49~
3Wordsmith49*screams*
THEY FOUGHT! THAT WAS SO EPIC! OH MY TURTLES THAT WAS AWSYM!
I wish they had beaten up Megan too. She deserved it. And I thought Casey was a Christian! He's got some issuez.
ANYWAY. I loved the chapter. And I learned a new vocabulary word, so that just makes it even better.
Update soon!
~Wordsmith49~
3/14/2011 c4 13angellover254
great past two chapters! I really hope that Michelle doesnt believe in that dream beacuse I know that Desmond really loves her. And Megan, wow...she goes from one guy to anothor, what a wonderful girlfriend she is...also I think you made a little mistake in ch 4 in desmond's POV: I rolled my eyes, and smiled down at Megan. She seemed troubled still. Shouldnt
Megan be Michelle? but anyways great chapters and I cant wait for the next:]
13angellover254great past two chapters! I really hope that Michelle doesnt believe in that dream beacuse I know that Desmond really loves her. And Megan, wow...she goes from one guy to anothor, what a wonderful girlfriend she is...also I think you made a little mistake in ch 4 in desmond's POV: I rolled my eyes, and smiled down at Megan. She seemed troubled still. Shouldnt
Megan be Michelle? but anyways great chapters and I cant wait for the next:]