for Days With Desmond3/5/2011 c1 
7E.Nelson
Yes, yes, very highly anticipated! Introductions are allowed to be shorter :) I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, so that's good lol. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more! :)
7E.NelsonYes, yes, very highly anticipated! Introductions are allowed to be shorter :) I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, so that's good lol. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more! :)
3/5/2011 c1 1Myst C
heres' my suggestion! MAKE HIM LIVE! He can't die...he better not its super depressing...but i'm gonna keep reading even if I cry... update soon!
1Myst Cheres' my suggestion! MAKE HIM LIVE! He can't die...he better not its super depressing...but i'm gonna keep reading even if I cry... update soon!
3/5/2011 c1 XshadowxdemonX
*FAn girl squeal*
YOU DID IT, YOU DID IT!
Loved it, can't ait for more!
Update A.S.A.P!
I might have to send my trusty T-Rex after you if you don't
~Among the Hidden
*FAn girl squeal*
YOU DID IT, YOU DID IT!
Loved it, can't ait for more!
Update A.S.A.P!
I might have to send my trusty T-Rex after you if you don't
~Among the Hidden
3/5/2011 c1 Admins Pls Delete Me
Nice first chapter to the sequel!
I think...towards the end you should have it where they find some way for Desmond to live. I mean, you shouldn't have him dying right?
Nice first chapter to the sequel!
I think...towards the end you should have it where they find some way for Desmond to live. I mean, you shouldn't have him dying right?