for Days With Desmond10/12/2011 c25 
13angellover254
I think I forgot to read this when it was updated awhile ago, but then I saw that you updated, and I realized I didn't read this chapter...Lol :)
But anyways I'm glad that they made up again! It was sweet of Jay trying to help Michelle, glad everything worked out in the end :]
I read the author note so I know your busy, which is understandable...so update whenever you have free time :]
13angellover254I think I forgot to read this when it was updated awhile ago, but then I saw that you updated, and I realized I didn't read this chapter...Lol :)
But anyways I'm glad that they made up again! It was sweet of Jay trying to help Michelle, glad everything worked out in the end :]
I read the author note so I know your busy, which is understandable...so update whenever you have free time :]
9/27/2011 c25 Aamna
AHHH. Desmond is so sweet in this chapter. AND JAY! I would sooo date Jay :P Awee. Its ok, he'll probably come around to liking you!Cant wait till the next chapter! Update soon!
AHHH. Desmond is so sweet in this chapter. AND JAY! I would sooo date Jay :P Awee. Its ok, he'll probably come around to liking you!Cant wait till the next chapter! Update soon!
9/27/2011 c24 Aamna
arrrggh! I am at loss for words. Im scared about whats gonna happen between her and desmond :$ AND OMG Brandon TOTALLY likes Seirra! I wish that was my world!
arrrggh! I am at loss for words. Im scared about whats gonna happen between her and desmond :$ AND OMG Brandon TOTALLY likes Seirra! I wish that was my world!
9/26/2011 c23 Aamna
HEYYY :) GAH. I would soo ditch desmond for Jay, just saying. :P Well I figured that Desmonds mom would be a little nicer about the situation and with Desmonds heart issue shes just being mean!
HEYYY :) GAH. I would soo ditch desmond for Jay, just saying. :P Well I figured that Desmonds mom would be a little nicer about the situation and with Desmonds heart issue shes just being mean!
9/24/2011 c25 1noriepie
Oh I'm sorry about Brandon, i was really rooting for you.
But you know...ex-girlfriend is not all that. Hope you get another date for homecoming.
Back to the story, I really like the three POVs. It deals with each other's personal views and helps me get a better idea of what's going on in their heads. Now there's not doubt Jay so wants to keep her all to himself. "want to kiss her"?
Michelle was a bit confusing. I understand she's feeling helpless with school and pregnancy. I did feel like she's playing with both of them, even though she doesn't mean it. She said yes to apartment hunting on weekend with both Jay and Desmond. She didn't say anything about hormones raging to Jay...I don't know, don't have a good feeling about it.
Desmond was at fault as well...but he's really trying to make up for it, so that's sweet. What's up with the squirrel?
If that's an attempt for a humor in the middle of a pretty serious stuff, I appreciate it. But...I think i vengeful squirrel is a little too much and suddenly non-realistic.
1noriepieOh I'm sorry about Brandon, i was really rooting for you.
But you know...ex-girlfriend is not all that. Hope you get another date for homecoming.
Back to the story, I really like the three POVs. It deals with each other's personal views and helps me get a better idea of what's going on in their heads. Now there's not doubt Jay so wants to keep her all to himself. "want to kiss her"?
Michelle was a bit confusing. I understand she's feeling helpless with school and pregnancy. I did feel like she's playing with both of them, even though she doesn't mean it. She said yes to apartment hunting on weekend with both Jay and Desmond. She didn't say anything about hormones raging to Jay...I don't know, don't have a good feeling about it.
Desmond was at fault as well...but he's really trying to make up for it, so that's sweet. What's up with the squirrel?
If that's an attempt for a humor in the middle of a pretty serious stuff, I appreciate it. But...I think i vengeful squirrel is a little too much and suddenly non-realistic.
9/24/2011 c25 Admins Pls Delete Me
Great chapter! I still don't like Jay...but I'll deal with it for now. And I'm glad Desmond apologized! Although, he shouldn't have even started the fight in the first place. But, obviously, all couples fight so it was bound to happen eventually. And, wow, I'm rambling lol.
Aw, well that's too bad. Maybe...maybe he likes you and he's taking his ex-girlfriend to make you jealous? haha I don't really know. Like I said, I'm clueless when it comes to guys. lol but at least you're friends, right?
Haha,so anyways, great chapter, keep up the good work, and update soon! :)
Great chapter! I still don't like Jay...but I'll deal with it for now. And I'm glad Desmond apologized! Although, he shouldn't have even started the fight in the first place. But, obviously, all couples fight so it was bound to happen eventually. And, wow, I'm rambling lol.
Aw, well that's too bad. Maybe...maybe he likes you and he's taking his ex-girlfriend to make you jealous? haha I don't really know. Like I said, I'm clueless when it comes to guys. lol but at least you're friends, right?
Haha,so anyways, great chapter, keep up the good work, and update soon! :)
9/24/2011 c25 the.sky.angel
EE! hehehe... my frined has an animal like that... but its a bired.. heheh annoying little thing he is. anyway... LOVE IT
EE! hehehe... my frined has an animal like that... but its a bired.. heheh annoying little thing he is. anyway... LOVE IT
9/24/2011 c25 CrystalGW34
I'm glad that they made up. Hopefully they can get back on track and stay there. I'm also holding out hope that their families will come around and support them because they need all the support they can get. I enjoyed this chapter as always. Please update again just as soon as you can. Can't wait to read more of this. :)
I'm glad that they made up. Hopefully they can get back on track and stay there. I'm also holding out hope that their families will come around and support them because they need all the support they can get. I enjoyed this chapter as always. Please update again just as soon as you can. Can't wait to read more of this. :)
9/24/2011 c25 2Twistedin2Delusions
I'm glad they're engaged. I can't wait for the big dramatic time when the babies are due and Desmond is supposed to... No longer be here.
2Twistedin2DelusionsI'm glad they're engaged. I can't wait for the big dramatic time when the babies are due and Desmond is supposed to... No longer be here.
9/23/2011 c25 Esperanza12
Love love love it! I can't tell how much I've been dying for the next chapter. I'm so happy they're good now!
Love love love it! I can't tell how much I've been dying for the next chapter. I'm so happy they're good now!
9/19/2011 c24 RonieLove
wow... didnt expect that in this chapter. seems like both desmond and michelles hormones are going off lol. can wait ffor the next chapter!
wow... didnt expect that in this chapter. seems like both desmond and michelles hormones are going off lol. can wait ffor the next chapter!