for Days With Desmond8/11/2011 c22 Esperanza12
Awesome.
I like Uncle Darren.
Then again, I love just about everything about this story :)
Update soon!
Awesome.
I like Uncle Darren.
Then again, I love just about everything about this story :)
Update soon!
8/11/2011 c22 
2Twistedin2Delusions
I think Darren is cool. Desmond, Desmond, Desmond. How do you forget your medicine? Anyway loved it and can't wait for an update. ;)
2Twistedin2DelusionsI think Darren is cool. Desmond, Desmond, Desmond. How do you forget your medicine? Anyway loved it and can't wait for an update. ;)
8/10/2011 c20 6Queen.Of.Cupcakes
I'm guessing the squirrel thing with have to do with how he catches it. Like, he has to gain its trust to get it and that shows him to to take care of kids. That or it will teach some great life lesson. Or, it's just him catching a squirrel to make money lol.
6Queen.Of.CupcakesI'm guessing the squirrel thing with have to do with how he catches it. Like, he has to gain its trust to get it and that shows him to to take care of kids. That or it will teach some great life lesson. Or, it's just him catching a squirrel to make money lol.
8/10/2011 c22 1noriepie
sweet. dramatic. uncle darren reminds me of luke in gilmore girls for some reason. gruff but nice.
1noriepiesweet. dramatic. uncle darren reminds me of luke in gilmore girls for some reason. gruff but nice.
8/10/2011 c22 13angellover254
Well I'm glad that Darren let them in...at least they got some support.
Lol, poor Desmond, trying to catch the squirrel, I wonder how that's gonna mean something in the later chapters.
Hope Desmond get's hired, they need all the money they can get.
Update soon kay?
13angellover254Well I'm glad that Darren let them in...at least they got some support.
Lol, poor Desmond, trying to catch the squirrel, I wonder how that's gonna mean something in the later chapters.
Hope Desmond get's hired, they need all the money they can get.
Update soon kay?
8/10/2011 c22 CrystalGW34
I like Desmond's uncle. He seems like a nice guy. Right now they need all the nice they can get. I hope their families will come around and make an effort to be supportive. I know they made a mistake, but that doesn't mean they deserve to be shut out forever. Anyway, I enjoyed reading the new chapter, as always. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)
I like Desmond's uncle. He seems like a nice guy. Right now they need all the nice they can get. I hope their families will come around and make an effort to be supportive. I know they made a mistake, but that doesn't mean they deserve to be shut out forever. Anyway, I enjoyed reading the new chapter, as always. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon. :)
8/7/2011 c21 17Ashley4287
omg! honestly ppl, just throw away your kids and grandkids because of YOUR status! how do you think THEY feel!
-_-
great ch btw
17Ashley4287omg! honestly ppl, just throw away your kids and grandkids because of YOUR status! how do you think THEY feel!
-_-
great ch btw
8/6/2011 c21 5TheRiverRunsDeep
Here is my prediction, if you kill off desmond...WE WILL HAVE PROBLEMS!...Anyways, thought chapter was sad with her mean dad...who I am currently having problems with...PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
5TheRiverRunsDeepHere is my prediction, if you kill off desmond...WE WILL HAVE PROBLEMS!...Anyways, thought chapter was sad with her mean dad...who I am currently having problems with...PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
8/5/2011 c21 2LDS Dreamer
I don't want Desmond to die. I want him to live long and take care of his twins with Michelle. I want them to become sucessful and then shove it in Michelle's dad's face. I know the last part is mean, but the dad was! I know my dad wouldn't do that. He would help me get through it. I know that most of what I just said might not happen, but I like wishing. I love this story very much!
2LDS DreamerI don't want Desmond to die. I want him to live long and take care of his twins with Michelle. I want them to become sucessful and then shove it in Michelle's dad's face. I know the last part is mean, but the dad was! I know my dad wouldn't do that. He would help me get through it. I know that most of what I just said might not happen, but I like wishing. I love this story very much!
8/5/2011 c21 1EpicGirl42
Hmmmm... this is tough. But I'm predicting one of the babies miscarries not too far into the pregnancy. Idk why exactly...And I know Jay's gonna come into the plot even more so now. Maybe they stay with him? Get some support/money/whatever from him? Just random ideas, haha. good chapter!
1EpicGirl42Hmmmm... this is tough. But I'm predicting one of the babies miscarries not too far into the pregnancy. Idk why exactly...And I know Jay's gonna come into the plot even more so now. Maybe they stay with him? Get some support/money/whatever from him? Just random ideas, haha. good chapter!
8/4/2011 c21 13angellover254
Well that sucks! I was hoping that their parents will support them, but I guess not:[ You did an amazing job on this chapter, it was really believable!
Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope that Desmond's uncle will take them in! Update soon please?
13angellover254Well that sucks! I was hoping that their parents will support them, but I guess not:[ You did an amazing job on this chapter, it was really believable!
Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope that Desmond's uncle will take them in! Update soon please?
8/4/2011 c21 Esperanza12
this was so sad. But Desmond was so awesome to stick up for Michelle. I can't wait to read the next chaoter! Please update soon, and don't let Desmond die!
this was so sad. But Desmond was so awesome to stick up for Michelle. I can't wait to read the next chaoter! Please update soon, and don't let Desmond die!
8/4/2011 c20 angellover254
Wow! Michelle is having Twins? That was a shocker!
I'm glad that Michelle got the job, but now I'm wondering what's gonna happen when they tell their parents at dinner...
Well onto the next chapter! Lol:]
Wow! Michelle is having Twins? That was a shocker!
I'm glad that Michelle got the job, but now I'm wondering what's gonna happen when they tell their parents at dinner...
Well onto the next chapter! Lol:]