for Days With Desmond8/4/2011 c21 CrystalGW34
Michelle's father is an ass. I wish I could reach through the computer screen and punch him. Such a sad chapter. I feel so bad for Michelle and Desmond. I hope his uncle will take them in. Please update again soon.
Michelle's father is an ass. I wish I could reach through the computer screen and punch him. Such a sad chapter. I feel so bad for Michelle and Desmond. I hope his uncle will take them in. Please update again soon.
8/4/2011 c21 the.sky.angel
Grrrr... sometimes i hate parents... i mean, i know they love us and everything but goin all that way to not help their own kids? *sigh* i feel sorry for them... i dont wat desmond to die now... :'( michelle needs him... sadface. anyway... u know u had just noticed that everyone buts my name like .angel. its reaaally weird. like EVERYONE does it. anyway... LOVE IT
Grrrr... sometimes i hate parents... i mean, i know they love us and everything but goin all that way to not help their own kids? *sigh* i feel sorry for them... i dont wat desmond to die now... :'( michelle needs him... sadface. anyway... u know u had just noticed that everyone buts my name like .angel. its reaaally weird. like EVERYONE does it. anyway... LOVE IT
8/4/2011 c21 
17Lady of romance world88
Hi. Its very beautiful chapter and i love it :)
I am glad to hear Michelle's trained with Amber at target went well. YAY! :D
OMG! OMG! I can't believe that Michelle's parents and Desmond's mum close their doors as they turn their head away from Michelle and Desmond forever. THATS SO BAD! :( WHY?
ITS not fair for Desmond and Michelle because more upset, more angry and more stress definitely kill Michelle or her babies. Trust me. It will happen because i already be same boat as Michelle few years ag so i hope that Desmond and Michelle won't turn bitter like me thats time so be careful. *worried*
OMG! Michelle's parents won't pay for them and kick them out of the house to force them to live on their own. Thats so selfish and horrid thing for their parents to do that to Desmond and Michelle :(
I just wish that Desmond's mum and Michelle's parents should see the positive things in life one day.
Maybe youth house or community centre will help and support Desmond and Michelle through the pregnant period because the people in those centers are always give positive advices. :)
I am hoping that Desmond's uncle will welcome him and Michelle in open arms with understand, love and support. *hopeful smile*
HURRY UPDATE SOON AND KEEP WRITING :D
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS OF THIS STORY WHENEVER YOU HAVE TIME TO UPDATE IT. DON;T STOP WRITING :D
ITS AMAZING CHAPTER AND I ENJPY READ THIS STORY. I LOVE IT AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON. :)
Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly :)
17Lady of romance world88Hi. Its very beautiful chapter and i love it :)
I am glad to hear Michelle's trained with Amber at target went well. YAY! :D
OMG! OMG! I can't believe that Michelle's parents and Desmond's mum close their doors as they turn their head away from Michelle and Desmond forever. THATS SO BAD! :( WHY?
ITS not fair for Desmond and Michelle because more upset, more angry and more stress definitely kill Michelle or her babies. Trust me. It will happen because i already be same boat as Michelle few years ag so i hope that Desmond and Michelle won't turn bitter like me thats time so be careful. *worried*
OMG! Michelle's parents won't pay for them and kick them out of the house to force them to live on their own. Thats so selfish and horrid thing for their parents to do that to Desmond and Michelle :(
I just wish that Desmond's mum and Michelle's parents should see the positive things in life one day.
Maybe youth house or community centre will help and support Desmond and Michelle through the pregnant period because the people in those centers are always give positive advices. :)
I am hoping that Desmond's uncle will welcome him and Michelle in open arms with understand, love and support. *hopeful smile*
HURRY UPDATE SOON AND KEEP WRITING :D
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS OF THIS STORY WHENEVER YOU HAVE TIME TO UPDATE IT. DON;T STOP WRITING :D
ITS AMAZING CHAPTER AND I ENJPY READ THIS STORY. I LOVE IT AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON. :)
Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly :)
8/4/2011 c20 Lady of romance world88
Hi. Its beautiful chapter and i love it :)
OMG! Michelle's pregnant with twins. Lucky for her and it will be double money because double money cost a lot for twins's clothes, prams, supplies and many things than one child in every two years or something. Plus twin are more dramas in school if they are identical. :)
Awww.. I am glad to hear that Jay and Michelle are friends. YAY! :D
I am glad to hear that Desmond and Michelle are look for jobs to support each other and their babies :)
Its amazing chapter and i am enjoy read this story. I LOVE IT and i am off to read the next chapter now :)
Hi. Its beautiful chapter and i love it :)
OMG! Michelle's pregnant with twins. Lucky for her and it will be double money because double money cost a lot for twins's clothes, prams, supplies and many things than one child in every two years or something. Plus twin are more dramas in school if they are identical. :)
Awww.. I am glad to hear that Jay and Michelle are friends. YAY! :D
I am glad to hear that Desmond and Michelle are look for jobs to support each other and their babies :)
Its amazing chapter and i am enjoy read this story. I LOVE IT and i am off to read the next chapter now :)
8/3/2011 c21 3SweetSarah2
I hate her dad. i was going to say that a few chapters ago but I forgot. And when I say I hate him, I REALLY hate him.
3SweetSarah2I hate her dad. i was going to say that a few chapters ago but I forgot. And when I say I hate him, I REALLY hate him.
8/3/2011 c21 1noriepie
That was intense...
Really, really intense...
Will it get better?
I don't know how real-life parents would act...it hurts lol. Especially since desmond is gonna die soon. I appreciate that it's not cookie-cutter sweet for these two though. There are some stories where things Always work out no matter what the characters do. X
1noriepieThat was intense...
Really, really intense...
Will it get better?
I don't know how real-life parents would act...it hurts lol. Especially since desmond is gonna die soon. I appreciate that it's not cookie-cutter sweet for these two though. There are some stories where things Always work out no matter what the characters do. X
8/3/2011 c21 broken-pixie
That's really sad ;( I feel so sorry for them, it's not fair to them, really. You did a great job on this chapter. I can't wait to see how they pull through this (hopefully they will).
That's really sad ;( I feel so sorry for them, it's not fair to them, really. You did a great job on this chapter. I can't wait to see how they pull through this (hopefully they will).
8/3/2011 c21 2Twistedin2Delusions
OH MY JACOB BLACK! THAT WAS AN EPIC CHAPTER! I KNEW HER DAD WAS GOING TO ACT LIKE THAT BUT THEIR MOMS TOO? Wow. That's all I can say. They didn't have to be that harsh on them. Keep up the good work :)
2Twistedin2DelusionsOH MY JACOB BLACK! THAT WAS AN EPIC CHAPTER! I KNEW HER DAD WAS GOING TO ACT LIKE THAT BUT THEIR MOMS TOO? Wow. That's all I can say. They didn't have to be that harsh on them. Keep up the good work :)
8/2/2011 c20 Aamna
OMG. this story is gettign very dramatic and u cant even guess how its going to end :/ Im scared ;P
OMG. this story is gettign very dramatic and u cant even guess how its going to end :/ Im scared ;P
8/2/2011 c19 Aamna
OMG. THIS IS CRAZY! I am freaking out that she is actually having a baby! Poor michelle. :( i think shell be able to handle it though... but not so sure about her dad after what he just said last chapter.:P
OMG. THIS IS CRAZY! I am freaking out that she is actually having a baby! Poor michelle. :( i think shell be able to handle it though... but not so sure about her dad after what he just said last chapter.:P
8/2/2011 c18 Aamna
AHHH.Sorry I havnt reviewed in a while. Summer vacay so ive been otu and about. Im on Jays side he seems hotter ;P
AHHH.Sorry I havnt reviewed in a while. Summer vacay so ive been otu and about. Im on Jays side he seems hotter ;P
8/2/2011 c19 17Lady of romance world88
Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) OMG! Desmond and Michelle have huge arguement over Jay and other things. Poor Desmond and Michelle. :( OMG! Desmond got heart attack. Thats very bad and oh no. Hope that Desmond won't die. Please don't let Desmond die and leave Michelle alone. :( I am glad to see that Desmond is okay. Yay! :D OMG! Michelle got symptoms of pregnancy. I am wonder if its just virus or pregnancy? Aww... Michelle and Desmond are going have baby together. How cute. :) Hope that their parents will support them through the pregnancy period. *hopeful smile* Its amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I LOVE IT and I'll read the rest of this story tonight. :)
17Lady of romance world88Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) OMG! Desmond and Michelle have huge arguement over Jay and other things. Poor Desmond and Michelle. :( OMG! Desmond got heart attack. Thats very bad and oh no. Hope that Desmond won't die. Please don't let Desmond die and leave Michelle alone. :( I am glad to see that Desmond is okay. Yay! :D OMG! Michelle got symptoms of pregnancy. I am wonder if its just virus or pregnancy? Aww... Michelle and Desmond are going have baby together. How cute. :) Hope that their parents will support them through the pregnancy period. *hopeful smile* Its amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I LOVE IT and I'll read the rest of this story tonight. :)
8/1/2011 c20 7Pan's Grandaughter
I am finally getting around to review, so here it goes:
The twins completely took me by surprise. I was not expecting that at all. But here is what I am expecting now: A boy who looks very much like D. and a girl who looks very much like L. That would be somewhat cliche-ish.
I'm quite glad M.'s brother showed up again. I was wondering where he dissapeared to.
Oh, and WebMD has all the answers.
Great chapter! It surprised me quite alot!
7Pan's GrandaughterI am finally getting around to review, so here it goes:
The twins completely took me by surprise. I was not expecting that at all. But here is what I am expecting now: A boy who looks very much like D. and a girl who looks very much like L. That would be somewhat cliche-ish.
I'm quite glad M.'s brother showed up again. I was wondering where he dissapeared to.
Oh, and WebMD has all the answers.
Great chapter! It surprised me quite alot!