for Life as a Coconut3/20/2011 c1 JCqueen
hey! :) this poem was really good. i was able to feel and understand the deep meaning behind it. although i don't really like poems in general, i like this one. i could really relate to this poem and i also don't think you're being too cheezy (? is that how you spell it?); you totally understand and it makes sense too. nice job on this poem! :)
hey! :) this poem was really good. i was able to feel and understand the deep meaning behind it. although i don't really like poems in general, i like this one. i could really relate to this poem and i also don't think you're being too cheezy (? is that how you spell it?); you totally understand and it makes sense too. nice job on this poem! :)
3/5/2011 c1 
1billiebloom
Hi(: this poem is really interesting, the coconut metaphor is brilliant albeit a little strange at first, it makes sense when you understand it.
Good job!
1billiebloomHi(: this poem is really interesting, the coconut metaphor is brilliant albeit a little strange at first, it makes sense when you understand it.
Good job!
3/5/2011 c1 31YoursInDemigodishness
I never would have thought of a coconut like that. It only makes me think of paradises. I now have a new perspective over them. It's also weird to think a coconut is a fruit, since most fruit are already so soft (lol). Good job! Also liked how you explained it at the end.
Keep writing!
31YoursInDemigodishnessI never would have thought of a coconut like that. It only makes me think of paradises. I now have a new perspective over them. It's also weird to think a coconut is a fruit, since most fruit are already so soft (lol). Good job! Also liked how you explained it at the end.
Keep writing!