for Writing Challenge Contest Entries3/13/2011 c1 
21Sercus Kaynine
I like how the cold practicality of this stabs straight to the point. Nice and brief.
Good job and good luck in WCC!
21Sercus KaynineI like how the cold practicality of this stabs straight to the point. Nice and brief.
Good job and good luck in WCC!
3/9/2011 c1 63RedactedNoLongerWriting
I like how to the point this is. It doesn't explicitly say it, of course, but you know exactly what it's talking about. I think the frank/basic listing of these things really works for the topic: you get the idea that whoever's listing this is nonchalant about torturing someone, to the point where the process of getting ready is much like a trip to the grocery store. Quite eerie!
Nice work and good luck in the WCC!
63RedactedNoLongerWritingI like how to the point this is. It doesn't explicitly say it, of course, but you know exactly what it's talking about. I think the frank/basic listing of these things really works for the topic: you get the idea that whoever's listing this is nonchalant about torturing someone, to the point where the process of getting ready is much like a trip to the grocery store. Quite eerie!
Nice work and good luck in the WCC!
3/8/2011 c1 this wild abyss
I thought the sparseness of this piece was interesting. The list-like format was interesting, and the meaning was readily obvious. Not really my favourite style, but I liked it all the same.
Best of luck in the WCC!
I thought the sparseness of this piece was interesting. The list-like format was interesting, and the meaning was readily obvious. Not really my favourite style, but I liked it all the same.
Best of luck in the WCC!