
12/5/2013 c26
3Miho Tribe
Also, I was wondering if you had successfully moved to Wattpad, and if so what your pen name might be so that I might continue following your work. Thank you! :)
Miho

Also, I was wondering if you had successfully moved to Wattpad, and if so what your pen name might be so that I might continue following your work. Thank you! :)
Miho
12/5/2013 c27 Miho Tribe
I just stayed up until 2:00 am to read your story. I LOVED it! Absolutely wonderful. It made me squeal several times. I will definitely be following your work from now on! Well done! :D
I just stayed up until 2:00 am to read your story. I LOVED it! Absolutely wonderful. It made me squeal several times. I will definitely be following your work from now on! Well done! :D
11/23/2013 c27 Guest
i cant find your story on wattpad
i cant find your story on wattpad
11/5/2013 c27
5OldAccount1
I finished this story in less than two days, and I don't think it would be exggerating to say that this is my favourite book I have EVER read so far, professional writer or not. I could feel all the emotions, and when I read I even forget that this is simply a story. I wished they weren't just characters. The way you told the story was seamless, and when I read I forget the passing of time and I'm just completely immersed in the story. I have literally screamed at some of the adorable moments, fangirl-style. Words can't tell you how much I love this book, and how much I enjoyed it. You are an extremely talented writer, and I couldn't find one thing I did not love about your writing and your beautiful book. Somehow I can't put all my feels into this one review, but omg their romance is just so real and perfect and the ways things progressed was just at the right speed. I could feel their passion, their love and their lust for one another, and the way Crispinus protects her and the way she protects him in turn is the best, and it's just...perfect. Now that I've finished I feel kind of empty and I don't know what to do. But I just wanted to tell, thank you for sharing this story, thank you for giving me a huge dose of ecstatic happiness when I read this, for the feels, the worries, the big grins in front of my laptop. I doubt I'll ever find a piece of writing that makes me feel emotions this strongly. You'll go very far with writing professionally, I'm sure, and I'll also be following you on wattpad. Thank you and good luck! :)

I finished this story in less than two days, and I don't think it would be exggerating to say that this is my favourite book I have EVER read so far, professional writer or not. I could feel all the emotions, and when I read I even forget that this is simply a story. I wished they weren't just characters. The way you told the story was seamless, and when I read I forget the passing of time and I'm just completely immersed in the story. I have literally screamed at some of the adorable moments, fangirl-style. Words can't tell you how much I love this book, and how much I enjoyed it. You are an extremely talented writer, and I couldn't find one thing I did not love about your writing and your beautiful book. Somehow I can't put all my feels into this one review, but omg their romance is just so real and perfect and the ways things progressed was just at the right speed. I could feel their passion, their love and their lust for one another, and the way Crispinus protects her and the way she protects him in turn is the best, and it's just...perfect. Now that I've finished I feel kind of empty and I don't know what to do. But I just wanted to tell, thank you for sharing this story, thank you for giving me a huge dose of ecstatic happiness when I read this, for the feels, the worries, the big grins in front of my laptop. I doubt I'll ever find a piece of writing that makes me feel emotions this strongly. You'll go very far with writing professionally, I'm sure, and I'll also be following you on wattpad. Thank you and good luck! :)
11/3/2013 c27 larinaka
Hey! Loved your story, great writing! I noticed a few grammatical errors but I'm a big stickler when it comes to grammar. Well, I'm curious as to where else your story is heading so keep us updated on your wattpad account so I can add you and keep up with your writing!
Thank you!
Larissa
Hey! Loved your story, great writing! I noticed a few grammatical errors but I'm a big stickler when it comes to grammar. Well, I'm curious as to where else your story is heading so keep us updated on your wattpad account so I can add you and keep up with your writing!
Thank you!
Larissa
10/28/2013 c27 Guest
Yess, still with yah, wattpad is a dutch website, so hi fellow country(wo)men. Love, love your story, please continue
Yess, still with yah, wattpad is a dutch website, so hi fellow country(wo)men. Love, love your story, please continue
10/23/2013 c27 Abby
Are you done moving to Wattpad yet? So excited!
Are you done moving to Wattpad yet? So excited!
10/22/2013 c27 notaghost
Hi there! I read your story a couple months ago, but i never reviewed because I thought the story was very much over and had been for a while. I recently went back to reread it and was really excited to see you updated :D This is one of my favorite stories I have ever read, and possibly the best one I've read on fictionpress. Usually I tend to have quite a few problems with stories that involve time traveling but I had absolutely none with this story. I love it so much! I actually really want to thank you, for two reasons. One, just for writing this and posting it online, and two, for the accuracy of it. I read this when it was summer time and I had not started school yet, but when I did it turns out that the first unit was based completely on Greece, and because Greece and Rome are so similar I was able to take things from this story and apply it to school. We recently started a new unit, and I decided to go and reread this because the new unit was actually the rise of Christianity in Rome, and while I was rereading it I found myself understanding a few more of the jokes that I got the context from in my philosophy and social institutions classes. This review is turning out to be really boring, sorry about that xD I just wanted to tell you that I really do appreciate this story and I'm looking forward to reading it on wattpad as well :) good luck in your writing!
Hi there! I read your story a couple months ago, but i never reviewed because I thought the story was very much over and had been for a while. I recently went back to reread it and was really excited to see you updated :D This is one of my favorite stories I have ever read, and possibly the best one I've read on fictionpress. Usually I tend to have quite a few problems with stories that involve time traveling but I had absolutely none with this story. I love it so much! I actually really want to thank you, for two reasons. One, just for writing this and posting it online, and two, for the accuracy of it. I read this when it was summer time and I had not started school yet, but when I did it turns out that the first unit was based completely on Greece, and because Greece and Rome are so similar I was able to take things from this story and apply it to school. We recently started a new unit, and I decided to go and reread this because the new unit was actually the rise of Christianity in Rome, and while I was rereading it I found myself understanding a few more of the jokes that I got the context from in my philosophy and social institutions classes. This review is turning out to be really boring, sorry about that xD I just wanted to tell you that I really do appreciate this story and I'm looking forward to reading it on wattpad as well :) good luck in your writing!
10/13/2013 c27 ToLoveIsToDestroy
This is officially my favorite story I've ever read. Also the fact that you put so much effort into it is beautiful. I hope to read more. :)
This is officially my favorite story I've ever read. Also the fact that you put so much effort into it is beautiful. I hope to read more. :)
10/11/2013 c27
2PaintedPicture
Amg, I want to know how it ends, please please let me know when you have moved over so I can follow you over and finish reading this story!

Amg, I want to know how it ends, please please let me know when you have moved over so I can follow you over and finish reading this story!
10/7/2013 c25 Hope
I just wanted to let you know how absolutely amazing this story is! I've read it several times now and I love it more with each reading! Thank you for posting it on this site and allowing me to read it. You are truly a gifted writer.
I just wanted to let you know how absolutely amazing this story is! I've read it several times now and I love it more with each reading! Thank you for posting it on this site and allowing me to read it. You are truly a gifted writer.
10/4/2013 c5 Guest
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10/4/2013 c27 Laura
This story is seriously amazing. I was actually thinking about how if you published it i would have bought it. I'm so sorry to hear that someone would be cowardly and lazy enough to steal someone else's hard work. I'd really like to read the rest of the story when you post it on Wattpad! Is it going to be under the same name or do you have the same author name?
The ending of that last chapter! holy crap! I'm dying to know what happens, it's killing me right now not to know! and i'm really scared that Crispin and Kate have been separated again! Can't wait for the next chapter!
This story is seriously amazing. I was actually thinking about how if you published it i would have bought it. I'm so sorry to hear that someone would be cowardly and lazy enough to steal someone else's hard work. I'd really like to read the rest of the story when you post it on Wattpad! Is it going to be under the same name or do you have the same author name?
The ending of that last chapter! holy crap! I'm dying to know what happens, it's killing me right now not to know! and i'm really scared that Crispin and Kate have been separated again! Can't wait for the next chapter!