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3/21/2011 c6 6Bokonon
I am in love with this story! I read all of the chapters in one sitting, and I'm still wanting more.

Your grammar is great, the story is progressing nicely, and the characters are awesome. You're good at making a distinction between Crispin's and Kate's POV. It can be difficult to make a POV switch and change writing styles to accommodate the characters' differences, but you do it so well - especially considering that you're writing for both a female and a male character.

Keep up the great work! I'll definitely be back to read more!
3/20/2011 c6 Nomore1234
This story so far is turning out good :D i can't wait to see what happens next.
3/20/2011 c6 BlueMoonlily
hey i really really really like this story! :D i hope you update soon! i cant wait to read more :)
3/19/2011 c6 TeeReeses24

It's so cute and I'm an Italy lover so.. lol

but yeah.. more please
3/19/2011 c6 3EdenR
I'm intrigued by this story and I'm interested to see where you take it. The language barrier is frustrating but necessary and it will be interesting to see how they continue to overcome it.
3/19/2011 c6 4AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick
amazing story! absolutely fabulous! please update soon! x
3/18/2011 c6 2Sparky328
I am in love with Crispinus. Just thought I'd let you know. ;)

Seriously, though, this is great! You using the Greek names for the gods helps a lot, to be honest. I don't know much about the Roman gods. X(

I am now an avid fan of this. I'll be sure to read the next chapter as soon as it comes out! :D
3/18/2011 c2 BlueMoonlily
i have to say that im intrigued by this story and im excited to see where it goes :)
3/18/2011 c6 RomanceObsessed
great update! is that really how the romans went to the bathroom? i hope something happens that enabled kate to speak latin, maybe one of the gods can grant her that ability or something.
3/18/2011 c6 1PeterMoore
thanks so much for the update! i really like crispin:) is kate ever going to start learning latin or is aphrodite going to realize the language barrier and give kate the power to suddenly learn latin?
3/18/2011 c6 Arabea
Oh my God, that bathroom scene was both funny and extremely awkward at the same time. Ah. I laughed really hard at the 'This week on the History Channel' bit. That was great! And I totally understand trying to piece together stuff in a language you don't fully understand. I took French for three years in high school, but it's been two years now since I've used it, and I don't remember much. Unfortunately, in one of my stories, one of the characters is French. And I do love French. I remember SOME of it. So it's just me, poking around my English-French dictionary and shuffling through my old French notes, trying to figure out what I'm doing. AGAIN. Hahaha. =)
3/18/2011 c6 CoryD
Great start!
3/18/2011 c1 2Wiseau Films

If you review my very well written poetry with long and helpful critique I will do the same for you!

3/15/2011 c5 9nicole-revival
I really like this story and I've been wanting to review, but my Kindle won't allow me to do so. I love that the goddesses are like watching pay per view of what's going on just as I'm reading it. I just think that is such a cool thing you have going on here. I wonder if Crispin ^_^ will teach Kate Latin because it might help a little with the language. I'm really curious how that will work.
3/15/2011 c5 4Faithfully Connected
Love your story, update soon hun!
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