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3/15/2011 c5 2Annaface
I really like how you manage the language barrier. Plus the fact that you actually make it an issue instead of just having her magically(or godly) know latin. It's fun :p

I look forward to more!
3/14/2011 c5 2Believe-In-Faeries
Yaay for your reply =] too cute.

this chapter was awesome! so no worries for the fiction ghosts. Actually they may be enjoying the story too. I like how you've been writing crispnus and kate. Can't wait to see how you get them to communicate cause two different languages cannot be easy! update soon so that i can send you review cookies ^_^
3/14/2011 c5 Arabea
Ah. Miscommunication. Gotta love it! =D I figured Crispinus would be the one to save Kate. And at least Kate knows a couple of words in Latin - I'd be completely lost. I don't know ANY. D= Can't wait for the next chapter! =)
3/14/2011 c5 2Sparky328
Three words: I love it!
3/14/2011 c5 RomanceObsessed
i really like this story so far. you wrote this story very well and it makes me wish that after this story you will write a prequel about how hades and Persephone got together.
3/14/2011 c1 1IridescentSoul
Hi! I didn't log into fictionpress for a long time but I just had to after reading this chapter because I wanted to tell you how much I'm looking forward to reading your story! Please keep up the good work(:
3/12/2011 c4 4L. Valdez
This is a great story! Can't wait for your next update. Although, I must say, the gladiator's name always sounds like crispiness to me haha.
I'm lovin the story so far.

You know used the Greek God Names instead of the Romans, which is wierd since they are in Rome.
3/10/2011 c3 RukiaKuchiki666
This is good, the whole gods part is very entertaining, keep up the good work!
3/10/2011 c1 ForeverMyOwn
This is a great story so far! I am always slightly disappointed with the mythology offerings this site has so I very happy to have stumbled upon this story. Just wondering if this is a prewritten story or if you are writing it as you go so I can get a feel for how fast you will be updating. Again, great job!
3/10/2011 c4 2Believe-In-Faeries
I'm really liking where this is going i feel like it can be an amazing story. I like your style of writing also. It's interesting to see both points of view. On another note, i assure you even if i don't review religiously you will not be writing to the internet ghosts =]
3/10/2011 c4 Arabea
Oh man, that was so cool how that played out. Honestly, I think I'd be able to deal if I was just dropped in a foreign country in this time period SOMEHOW. But to be dropped in the middle of ancient Rome? Yeah, I'd be so effing lost. SO lost. I feel bad for Kate. Seriously.
3/10/2011 c3 Jasminedesi16
I really love this story. It's very orginal. I can't wait to read more. :)
3/9/2011 c3 Dragonwryn
Wow this is an awesome story I love mythology and the whole Hades and Persephone thing makes me smile. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the good work
3/8/2011 c3 withaflutterofwings
Really refreshing story, an idea i have never really seen. Really well written too, please continue soon!
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