for Numb3/8/2011 c1 Punslinger
This is a strong mood poem, all the more impressive because of its brevity. The closing simile suggests a striking image. Well done.
This is a strong mood poem, all the more impressive because of its brevity. The closing simile suggests a striking image. Well done.
3/8/2011 c1 lymli
wow ^_^ all the thing bout dreamin n fascination made me think how people lav to evade from realitym cool piece
wow ^_^ all the thing bout dreamin n fascination made me think how people lav to evade from realitym cool piece
3/8/2011 c1 
74LadyAnesta
Great ending: "Like a frozen witness of slaughter,/ I turn away"
The poem leads you into a melancholy lull, and then snaps you out of it. Very nicely done.
74LadyAnestaGreat ending: "Like a frozen witness of slaughter,/ I turn away"
The poem leads you into a melancholy lull, and then snaps you out of it. Very nicely done.