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9/22/2011 c1 22my poor toaster
That was really good.

Like really really good.

I feel bad now, because all i can write about is a bunch of stupid crayons.

Awesom job, off i go to read more!

Forward march!

-3mily

Ps: its 3 am. I shall always review, but i cant peomise that my reviews shall make sence ;)
3/21/2011 c1 4siriuslyobsesed
Loved this ... i love the imagery of the grave. seriously adore your poems :)
3/13/2011 c1 68Katherine Rhett
This is good. I like the extended metaphor and the violent imagery toward the end. The short lines help create a mood. Good job.
3/12/2011 c1 Alysha Steph
we can relate to this
3/10/2011 c1 19Coroxn
Really, really good.

I love a lot of this, it's great, great poetry.

Keep writing, you're good.

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