3/1/2014 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
Thanks for reviewing my poem 8 years ago, lol. You are exceptionally beautiful in your photo. I see you've not uploaded anything for a while now, I guess I haven't either. Any way, I like this poem, you did really well with the content and the overall feel of it.
You'll no doubt go far in life, you have brains and beauty, an almost unbeatable combination.
Good luck,
Alan.
Thanks for reviewing my poem 8 years ago, lol. You are exceptionally beautiful in your photo. I see you've not uploaded anything for a while now, I guess I haven't either. Any way, I like this poem, you did really well with the content and the overall feel of it.
You'll no doubt go far in life, you have brains and beauty, an almost unbeatable combination.
Good luck,
Alan.
3/14/2011 c1 19Coroxn
Hehe.
This is a dead ring for my life, and, I have to suppose, the lives of others. I loved the rhyme in this, though talent and internet don't rhyme, the rest is so brilliant I will forgive. A very true piece on the trials we, as intelligent people, face.
Answer key personified.
That used to be me.
It's all about striking the balance, you see, just laugh at the jokes that aren't clever, make a few of your own, never act arrogant, and people's natural friendliness outways their hostility.
Hehe.
This is a dead ring for my life, and, I have to suppose, the lives of others. I loved the rhyme in this, though talent and internet don't rhyme, the rest is so brilliant I will forgive. A very true piece on the trials we, as intelligent people, face.
Answer key personified.
That used to be me.
It's all about striking the balance, you see, just laugh at the jokes that aren't clever, make a few of your own, never act arrogant, and people's natural friendliness outways their hostility.