for Beautifully Flawed7/3/2013 c30 L.Y Escape Reality
Oh god he better not tell her about Greg and the story! great chapter :) Benry is an idiot haha but things will work out. I kind of want James to like her haha
Update soon
Oh god he better not tell her about Greg and the story! great chapter :) Benry is an idiot haha but things will work out. I kind of want James to like her haha
Update soon
7/3/2013 c30 skye real
My god, I feel awful for her! Such a moving chapter and you related their feelings so eloquently! Oh I can't wait to find out what happens next!
My god, I feel awful for her! Such a moving chapter and you related their feelings so eloquently! Oh I can't wait to find out what happens next!
7/3/2013 c29 mylittleprincess
next chapter please:)
next chapter please:)
7/3/2013 c30 Guest
Pls fix dis and dont leave us hanging update soon,i luv dis story sooooooooo much
Pls fix dis and dont leave us hanging update soon,i luv dis story sooooooooo much
7/3/2013 c30 
29Ginbrat
No! No, no, no, no, no, no, no! They are meant to be together! This can't happen! Stupid mother freaking Abby! I don't care if she wanted to make Benry feel better! Benry, dear God, Benry...So freaking stupid! Please update soon.
29GinbratNo! No, no, no, no, no, no, no! They are meant to be together! This can't happen! Stupid mother freaking Abby! I don't care if she wanted to make Benry feel better! Benry, dear God, Benry...So freaking stupid! Please update soon.
7/3/2013 c30 brash73
this chapter was heartbreaking, I had a feeling something bad was going to happen... poor Collins. I hope James finally tells her about Greg and what happened to him.
I am excited for the next chapter!
this chapter was heartbreaking, I had a feeling something bad was going to happen... poor Collins. I hope James finally tells her about Greg and what happened to him.
I am excited for the next chapter!
7/2/2013 c30 1penname JC
As a testament to your writing skills, Benry actually felt fuzzy and stumbling to me in places. You did a great job with the drunk and miserable bits. But, I hurt for both of them. That was awful.
1penname JCAs a testament to your writing skills, Benry actually felt fuzzy and stumbling to me in places. You did a great job with the drunk and miserable bits. But, I hurt for both of them. That was awful.
7/1/2013 c29 Secrets
This is the first story I read in fiction press, and I started fiction press last-to-last year which means that you update VERY,VERY slowly...SO UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! :P
Later!
This is the first story I read in fiction press, and I started fiction press last-to-last year which means that you update VERY,VERY slowly...SO UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! :P
Later!
6/25/2013 c29 Fading-Scream
While your storyline and characters are brilliant, I feel that your writing may need a bit of work. It's sometimes extremely confusing, especially as you frequently use the wrong word or miss out a word so that the sentence becomes unintelligible and makes you sound like a third language English user. A beta reader would certainly help with that. Other than that, and that it sometimes takes forever to figure out who's pov the story has switched to, it's really rather good. I'd TOTALLY log in and follow it, however I'm impatient and it seems as if your updates are extremely slow. All the best in your writing. Regards, Kris
While your storyline and characters are brilliant, I feel that your writing may need a bit of work. It's sometimes extremely confusing, especially as you frequently use the wrong word or miss out a word so that the sentence becomes unintelligible and makes you sound like a third language English user. A beta reader would certainly help with that. Other than that, and that it sometimes takes forever to figure out who's pov the story has switched to, it's really rather good. I'd TOTALLY log in and follow it, however I'm impatient and it seems as if your updates are extremely slow. All the best in your writing. Regards, Kris