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3/22/2013 c28 9AKhwab
I know I shouldn't feel this way but when I saw 28 chapters, I thought that was it. Now I know it isn't. But it's okay! You've been going great so far though I have to say that chapter 28 had kind of an abrupt ending. I can't wait for Benry to tell Collins about whatever it is he's hiding already. I also can't wait for Benry & Bradley to become BFFs again. I would also like to point out that you've made several spelling errors and grammatical mistakes from the start. Please go back & check on them. I'm sorry for not being able to pinpoint the specific areas. Please keep writing. Thank you.
3/22/2013 c28 Guest
And the reviewer before my last one is an idiot. No one cares what she thinks because honestly by the amount of reviews you have you are pleasing plenty of us! We love your work so hope her crap comment doesn't deter you from continuing this amazing story.
3/22/2013 c28 Guest
I just have to say Benry is an idiot. I can't believe that he even defended hanging out with Abby because it is nothing like what Collins does with James. That is an actual friendship where one of them doesn't have feelings for the other. And it kind of made me question Benry feeling as much as he says he does for Collins because if he loved her as much as he claims I cant understand him not understanding why him hanging out with Abby is such a big deal to Collins. I know this is a terrible thing to say but I kind of hope that Abby slips up and spills what happened with Greg to Collins because it would feel almost like a little bit of sweet revenge for Benry thinking he could trust his "friendship" with Abby and then to have her be the one to shatter Collins. I'm not saying when Collins finds out that I want her to break up with Benry because God I don't-I've grown to fall in love with those two and I truly want them to have a happy ending, maybe a little bit of begging on Benrys part though! Haha Maybe I was just thrown because usually Benry hates her alone at parties and stuff for fear that she will find out his secret and this chapter he seemed independent and carefree to let her do whatever and be around whoever..

But enough of my ranting. Excellent chapter, please update it again really soon! I can't wait as long as the last time-PLEASE! This is my favorite story on this site!
3/22/2013 c5 2Ceskasi
Hey Heads up, this isn't a positive reaview.
I know I'm just on Chapter five but I don't like where the plot is heading. I also don't like the character development. So sorry but I don't think that I can continue further.
Your story is cliche.
New girl gets noticed by popular boy? Cliche.
Popular boy has an enemy popular boy? Cliche.
Drama bitch? Cliche.
Cliche, cliche, cliche.
Sorry but it's just my opinion. I, too, had my fair share of merciless criticism but that just made me want to get better. I hope this review won't rub off of you the wrong way.
Just double-check your chapter and get a Beta Reader because you also have grammar and spelling errors.

3/22/2013 c28 monkeyface1
aww so cute! chapter is great, and dude where have you been? i thought you were giving up! but im glad you didnt thanks for updating and collin is so cute!
3/22/2013 c3 9AKhwab
Hmmm... Let me get this straight. Bradley & Taylor? Okay... Not bad actually. But Benry & Collins? That's expected.
3/18/2013 c27 23rd Bookworm
You haven't updated in ages, update soon please cas I love this story.
3/10/2013 c27 Guest
Please update this story already! I check every day to see if a new chapter is up :(
2/18/2013 c27 29Ginbrat
I love Benry and Collins! Benry is abso-freaking-lutely adorable! Please update soon!
2/16/2013 c27 fre
Great story!

But can you try not to use much of the same phrases like: "dry laugh" and "the young boy/girl"

Update soon!
2/16/2013 c27 Guest
Is this story over
2/15/2013 c12 10tenna shut up
James is awesome. I heard clicks! With Collins :)) I'm just sort of happy she gets to talk to someone else for a change and I must admit, in your face Benry. Dying to know what it is everyone isn't saying!
2/4/2013 c27 JJsMommy29
so hoping that he can be honest with her soon and so that it doesn't backfire on Benry so can't wait to see what happens next and wondering when Bradley and Taylor are going to let people know that there together
2/2/2013 c27 lanae96
So glad for an update ! I love how Benry is with Collins . Adorable ! I wonder how those 2 days away from each other is gonna be ? Hopefully nothing bad ! Please update soon : )
2/1/2013 c27 mylittleprincess
update :)
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