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8/9/2012 c17 2RainbowHeart
OH MY GOD! I'm freaking addicted, so I actually started this story ages ago (before I had a FP account) and forgot about it, just found it again, IT'S INCREDIBLE! I want a benry! Do you happen to have a spare one lying around? I'll can so take him off your hands! He is PERF! God I love this story! Please post soon!
8/8/2012 c17 AccountKiller12393
At first I didn't know how to feel about this story, but now I can't stop reading and rereading each chapter. Can't wait til you update again !
Amazing author and story, though there are some grammatical and spelling errors. But the story line is awesome
8/8/2012 c17 3Just a Little Miss
Brilliant. I love this story, a lot, actually. I really can't wait for your next update, though I have a feeling I'm probably going to have to get over that anyway. I'll let you know when I think of an adjective that can really describe how much I like it, I just need to find a thesaurus first ;P
Grammar Police:
1. You keep using wondering instead of wandering. Remember, wondering is thinking, as in "he wondered if she was alright" and wandering is for moving around, "the girl wandered around the room"
2. Try to pay more attention to differentiating between To and Too, as well as Your and You're
Sorry if I'm bothering you with this, only trying to help. Best intentions & best wishes for the future, Missy
8/8/2012 c17 mylittleprincess
update more please.
8/8/2012 c17 buttercup123
Lovely chapter to this already lovely story. I think Benry can teach Collins a lot of things about being happy and young. Thank you for the update! :)
8/8/2012 c17 Lucy Freebird
Great story so far!
8/8/2012 c17 Essandra
Great story! Love the characters.. I just really wanna know what happend to Greg but I know thats probbaly one of the bigger reveals in the story and the climax that makes everything tumble.. Hope too see an update soon! Thanks :)
8/7/2012 c17 6Alexa Rg
I didn't like it; I loved it! I love how Collins went skinny dipping and I just... can't wait for the next chappie! :)
8/7/2012 c17 UbiquityEssence
yaay! can't wait for more. glad benry and collins' relationship is developing!
8/7/2012 c17 29Ginbrat
Benry is so sweet and cute!
Please update soon.
8/7/2012 c17 loo
I just love this story.
8/7/2012 c17 JJsMommy29
so loving this story great chapter by the way and so can't wait for more to see what happens next
8/3/2012 c16 lssn12
Please please please update :)
I love Benry and Collins, they're so cute together 3
8/2/2012 c1 Elaine
More PLEASE!
7/15/2012 c16 SweetTea91
This chapter was great. Keep writing you have a wonderful talent
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