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7/15/2012 c1 Guest
Love this story! Keep updating pleaseeee!
7/9/2012 c16 jl
I'm not really a fan of stories that focus on more than just the main couple.. like in the way of branching off of the main story and focusing on other characters.. I feel like thats just a filler for when the author doesnt have much to write about the main couple and I tend to skip those parts because its just not interesting enough. It's your style and your story so whatever.. but I just feel like its a little lazy.
7/7/2012 c16 1Shockinglightning
God! I want to know whatelse happens! :) update plz.
7/6/2012 c16 mylittlePRINCESS
can't wait for next chapter.
7/6/2012 c16 29Ginbrat
Awww! I love this story Benry is so completely in love with Collins it's unbelievable! And vice versa for her! Please please please update soon!
7/5/2012 c16 Guest
First off, I would like to say that you have some great ideas, and you have developed your characters very well. I would, however, suggest maybe going back through and checking your grammar. You always seem to switch tenses and it can be incredibly distracting. I have read three of your stories now, and I have noticed it in all of them. But, that's just something to think about. I recommend it because I'm kind of a freak about grammar, but it doesn't seem to be bothering anyone else, so maybe it's just me that finds it distracting. Anyway, it's a great story, and you have some really great ideas! Just maybe think about fixing up that grammar a little..? :)
-Looking forward to an update soon.
7/5/2012 c16 JJsMommy29
loved this chapter and so can't wait to see what happens next in it so keep up the amazing work and update soon
7/5/2012 c16 Guest
Damn... I just can't wait for the next chapter...

I want to know what the deal with Jeri is and why is she acting like Andrew said. Besides that, I know that there are some secrets we have to wait for the characters to reveal and I know Collins is probably going to freak out... :S

Like always, it was an amazing chapter and I'm definitely on the edge of my toes waiting for the next one! :)
7/5/2012 c16 Guest
Omg! One of my top fav! Update! Surely want to know more. :) theyre just too cute.
7/5/2012 c16 amyuhohs
It always makes me so mad when I realize I'm at the end of the chapter! Haha I get so excited when I get the email that you updated, and I wonder what weird situations they might be in now, and then I get to the end and I'm sad haha I love your story3
7/5/2012 c16 shann-ng
great chapter ahhh i hope andrew and jeri make up :( and i hope abby stops being so difficult soon:O looking forward to next update ahh :)
7/5/2012 c16 Kristen196
I can't wait until Taylor gets caught by Ben! That's going to be an interesting chapter. Anyway, good chapter as always, I really can't wait until the next update. I swear I have a mini heart I see that you've posted a new chapter! Update soon!
7/4/2012 c16 AccountKiller12393
have I told you I check for updates everyday? I'm actually addicted to this 3 please don't stop updating ! Love Collins and Benry, and also Jeri and Andy. WAH SO CUTE, please update soon!
7/4/2012 c16 1funnechick
Wow...Benry really does like her.
7/4/2012 c15 Guest
Love it! hahaha! I've been reading this over and over again ) I like it! Please Update! D
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