for Beautifully Flawed7/15/2012 c1 Guest
Love this story! Keep updating pleaseeee!
Love this story! Keep updating pleaseeee!
7/9/2012 c16 jl
I'm not really a fan of stories that focus on more than just the main couple.. like in the way of branching off of the main story and focusing on other characters.. I feel like thats just a filler for when the author doesnt have much to write about the main couple and I tend to skip those parts because its just not interesting enough. It's your style and your story so whatever.. but I just feel like its a little lazy.
I'm not really a fan of stories that focus on more than just the main couple.. like in the way of branching off of the main story and focusing on other characters.. I feel like thats just a filler for when the author doesnt have much to write about the main couple and I tend to skip those parts because its just not interesting enough. It's your style and your story so whatever.. but I just feel like its a little lazy.
7/6/2012 c16 
29Ginbrat
Awww! I love this story Benry is so completely in love with Collins it's unbelievable! And vice versa for her! Please please please update soon!
29GinbratAwww! I love this story Benry is so completely in love with Collins it's unbelievable! And vice versa for her! Please please please update soon!
7/5/2012 c16 Guest
First off, I would like to say that you have some great ideas, and you have developed your characters very well. I would, however, suggest maybe going back through and checking your grammar. You always seem to switch tenses and it can be incredibly distracting. I have read three of your stories now, and I have noticed it in all of them. But, that's just something to think about. I recommend it because I'm kind of a freak about grammar, but it doesn't seem to be bothering anyone else, so maybe it's just me that finds it distracting. Anyway, it's a great story, and you have some really great ideas! Just maybe think about fixing up that grammar a little..? :)
-Looking forward to an update soon.
First off, I would like to say that you have some great ideas, and you have developed your characters very well. I would, however, suggest maybe going back through and checking your grammar. You always seem to switch tenses and it can be incredibly distracting. I have read three of your stories now, and I have noticed it in all of them. But, that's just something to think about. I recommend it because I'm kind of a freak about grammar, but it doesn't seem to be bothering anyone else, so maybe it's just me that finds it distracting. Anyway, it's a great story, and you have some really great ideas! Just maybe think about fixing up that grammar a little..? :)
-Looking forward to an update soon.
7/5/2012 c16 JJsMommy29
loved this chapter and so can't wait to see what happens next in it so keep up the amazing work and update soon
loved this chapter and so can't wait to see what happens next in it so keep up the amazing work and update soon
7/5/2012 c16 Guest
Damn... I just can't wait for the next chapter...
I want to know what the deal with Jeri is and why is she acting like Andrew said. Besides that, I know that there are some secrets we have to wait for the characters to reveal and I know Collins is probably going to freak out... :S
Like always, it was an amazing chapter and I'm definitely on the edge of my toes waiting for the next one! :)
Damn... I just can't wait for the next chapter...
I want to know what the deal with Jeri is and why is she acting like Andrew said. Besides that, I know that there are some secrets we have to wait for the characters to reveal and I know Collins is probably going to freak out... :S
Like always, it was an amazing chapter and I'm definitely on the edge of my toes waiting for the next one! :)
7/5/2012 c16 Guest
Omg! One of my top fav! Update! Surely want to know more. :) theyre just too cute.
Omg! One of my top fav! Update! Surely want to know more. :) theyre just too cute.
7/5/2012 c16 amyuhohs
It always makes me so mad when I realize I'm at the end of the chapter! Haha I get so excited when I get the email that you updated, and I wonder what weird situations they might be in now, and then I get to the end and I'm sad haha I love your story3
It always makes me so mad when I realize I'm at the end of the chapter! Haha I get so excited when I get the email that you updated, and I wonder what weird situations they might be in now, and then I get to the end and I'm sad haha I love your story3
7/5/2012 c16 shann-ng
great chapter ahhh i hope andrew and jeri make up :( and i hope abby stops being so difficult soon:O looking forward to next update ahh :)
great chapter ahhh i hope andrew and jeri make up :( and i hope abby stops being so difficult soon:O looking forward to next update ahh :)
7/5/2012 c16 Kristen196
I can't wait until Taylor gets caught by Ben! That's going to be an interesting chapter. Anyway, good chapter as always, I really can't wait until the next update. I swear I have a mini heart I see that you've posted a new chapter! Update soon!
I can't wait until Taylor gets caught by Ben! That's going to be an interesting chapter. Anyway, good chapter as always, I really can't wait until the next update. I swear I have a mini heart I see that you've posted a new chapter! Update soon!
7/4/2012 c16 AccountKiller12393
have I told you I check for updates everyday? I'm actually addicted to this 3 please don't stop updating ! Love Collins and Benry, and also Jeri and Andy. WAH SO CUTE, please update soon!
have I told you I check for updates everyday? I'm actually addicted to this 3 please don't stop updating ! Love Collins and Benry, and also Jeri and Andy. WAH SO CUTE, please update soon!