for Beautifully Flawed5/7/2011 c4 Xiaolu
The story is really interesting. I wonder what happened to collins, probably something related to Greg and Lexi maybe?
Also, I can't help but be scared for her, scared that Benry will hurt her and he probably will. ):
Loving Bradley and Taylor together, btw! They're just so cute!
The story is really interesting. I wonder what happened to collins, probably something related to Greg and Lexi maybe?
Also, I can't help but be scared for her, scared that Benry will hurt her and he probably will. ):
Loving Bradley and Taylor together, btw! They're just so cute!
4/6/2011 c3 leavemeialone
This story is interesting. I like to see where it goes. I knew that Taylor was with Bradley even before the clues were given, it was just a hunch. I want to read why they have so much bad blood. Benry is an interesting name, I have never met anyone with that name. I don't know how I quite feel about him. I do like Bradley though.
This story is interesting. I like to see where it goes. I knew that Taylor was with Bradley even before the clues were given, it was just a hunch. I want to read why they have so much bad blood. Benry is an interesting name, I have never met anyone with that name. I don't know how I quite feel about him. I do like Bradley though.
4/6/2011 c3 
5ILveJcb
M! Love it! I guess my guess was right, huh? And as I said, that just added such a sweet tone to the whole story! I absolutely love it. Although i cant help thinking Bradley might also be using Taylor to get back at Ben...I hope not because I'll kill him. I dont care if he's fictional.
Im 18 and dont mind anything in this story but I think the mild sexual scene could be a little too much for the youngers...Maybe you should change the rating to M? At least that way you can say you warned them :P
Please update REALLY soon!
Thanks :)
5ILveJcbM! Love it! I guess my guess was right, huh? And as I said, that just added such a sweet tone to the whole story! I absolutely love it. Although i cant help thinking Bradley might also be using Taylor to get back at Ben...I hope not because I'll kill him. I dont care if he's fictional.
Im 18 and dont mind anything in this story but I think the mild sexual scene could be a little too much for the youngers...Maybe you should change the rating to M? At least that way you can say you warned them :P
Please update REALLY soon!
Thanks :)
4/6/2011 c2 ILveJcb
I have an inkling that the guy who had taken Taylor into a room might actually be Bradley...? I hope it is. That'd make teh whole thing sweeter :P
I have an inkling that the guy who had taken Taylor into a room might actually be Bradley...? I hope it is. That'd make teh whole thing sweeter :P
4/5/2011 c3 Matiroxs
Our story is amazing, I love how it is centered on two loveish things, not just one. =D
Our story is amazing, I love how it is centered on two loveish things, not just one. =D
4/4/2011 c3 foxyricanlady
wow great chapter somehings are starting to take their place and i really enjoying it all the way please update soon
wow great chapter somehings are starting to take their place and i really enjoying it all the way please update soon
3/21/2011 c2 2classicallyclassic
Man! There's so much mystery surrounding this story that I don't even know where to begin asking questions. I'm hooked. Please update!
2classicallyclassicMan! There's so much mystery surrounding this story that I don't even know where to begin asking questions. I'm hooked. Please update!
3/18/2011 c1 Sanguinis luna puella
as good as ur other story I'm reading, dont fall for the players. hey, everybody reading this. u must read that story!
as good as ur other story I'm reading, dont fall for the players. hey, everybody reading this. u must read that story!