for a tonic for my isotonic3/13/2011 c1 sunflowerdream
Thanks for coming back to writing!
I like this, and though i havent wrapped my head around much poetry recently my only real feedback is that the structure breaks the flow of ideas. the sentences are beautiful, but it's had to absorbe their meaning with the broken formatting.
So happy to see you're still writing every so often.
Thanks for coming back to writing!
I like this, and though i havent wrapped my head around much poetry recently my only real feedback is that the structure breaks the flow of ideas. the sentences are beautiful, but it's had to absorbe their meaning with the broken formatting.
So happy to see you're still writing every so often.