4/25/2021 c1 santosjudy437
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
4/6/2011 c1 8Anne Oying
yeeha!
I can imagine gummy old beardy cowboys slapping their thighs and reciting this, I can't wait to meet this Orias Dire who "rides with the smoke on the horizon"
yeeha!
I can imagine gummy old beardy cowboys slapping their thighs and reciting this, I can't wait to meet this Orias Dire who "rides with the smoke on the horizon"
3/19/2011 c1 Punslinger
I can't judge this as a song without hearing the music. But it makes a good story poem with lilting rhymes and vivid images.
I can't judge this as a song without hearing the music. But it makes a good story poem with lilting rhymes and vivid images.
3/16/2011 c2 2DustyTheCowboy
They say he rides with smoke on the horizo-...What? It's catchy! It convinced me that Orias Dire was the greatest outlaw the world has ever known. Anyway, I think you should write lots more of this because it's just about the greatest piece of western Literature I ever read.
They say he rides with smoke on the horizo-...What? It's catchy! It convinced me that Orias Dire was the greatest outlaw the world has ever known. Anyway, I think you should write lots more of this because it's just about the greatest piece of western Literature I ever read.