for Sex, Not Making Love3/18 c20 Christina
Oh my... wow. That was dramatic. And AMAZING
Oh my... wow. That was dramatic. And AMAZING
7/31/2020 c20 Hi
Hi
Hi
4/14/2020 c21 Carson
I'm 17 and I would never come to as good of wrighting as u did here great job
I'm 17 and I would never come to as good of wrighting as u did here great job
3/27/2020 c21 cookielover
Why the hell are you so amzaing!?i have read alot of love fanfictions but yours!yours is the best!i know im a few years late please keep writing you are my fav writer i never find good fanfictions yours has a whole story and it doesnt just jump into sex you are amzaing if you do write a book in real life i would buy it keep up the amzing work
Why the hell are you so amzaing!?i have read alot of love fanfictions but yours!yours is the best!i know im a few years late please keep writing you are my fav writer i never find good fanfictions yours has a whole story and it doesnt just jump into sex you are amzaing if you do write a book in real life i would buy it keep up the amzing work
1/8/2020 c1 Cleo
Is that Niki and Nate as the picture?
Is that Niki and Nate as the picture?
10/17/2019 c21 Guest
Hi! I loved the story. I get that anxiety you talked about when posting the story, and it's fine to have people mad at you butyou shouldn't feel too bad about it. There will be people like that and you can't feel bad about it. Read it, know about it, and move on. Of course you have to improve on yourself but you shouldn't be so hard on yourself.
I read this story and pushed on even though there were the I'm-not-like-other-girls elements and slutshaming going on but it was part of her character, and I can't say that calling girls slut when you hate them isn't normal for girls like us. It's a hateable characteristic but it's standard. Just as long as the slutshaming is called out in the story, I think it's okay.
Over all, the story was pretty consistent, I can see your effort in keeping it up, and I definitely would still like to read more of your work and see your improvement as a writer.
Hi! I loved the story. I get that anxiety you talked about when posting the story, and it's fine to have people mad at you butyou shouldn't feel too bad about it. There will be people like that and you can't feel bad about it. Read it, know about it, and move on. Of course you have to improve on yourself but you shouldn't be so hard on yourself.
I read this story and pushed on even though there were the I'm-not-like-other-girls elements and slutshaming going on but it was part of her character, and I can't say that calling girls slut when you hate them isn't normal for girls like us. It's a hateable characteristic but it's standard. Just as long as the slutshaming is called out in the story, I think it's okay.
Over all, the story was pretty consistent, I can see your effort in keeping it up, and I definitely would still like to read more of your work and see your improvement as a writer.
6/2/2019 c22 
6Myght Dyno
I hoped there would be an epilogue where Maggie and Carson would have like six kids and married.
6Myght DynoI hoped there would be an epilogue where Maggie and Carson would have like six kids and married.
5/30/2019 c1 Z
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3/25/2019 c13 Ala
Just wanna say this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read.
Just wanna say this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read.
10/6/2018 c21 SpaceBot
Oh my god! This book/story is sooooo good! You shouldn’t doubt yourself, this is one of the best stories I’ve ever read! I’m so glad I found this story! I would totally read more of this! Keep up with the good work! And good luck with school and everything!
Oh my god! This book/story is sooooo good! You shouldn’t doubt yourself, this is one of the best stories I’ve ever read! I’m so glad I found this story! I would totally read more of this! Keep up with the good work! And good luck with school and everything!
7/5/2018 c21 Guest
this was such a great story i loved it! u should really continue it
this was such a great story i loved it! u should really continue it
6/9/2018 c21 Fiction reviewer
THIS WAS AWESOME
I especially liked that once they started dating they never cheated because that is a really bad habit authors have which makes me want to barf although I did not really appreciate that Carson did cheat once but otherwise I loved how sweet this was!
THIS WAS AWESOME
I especially liked that once they started dating they never cheated because that is a really bad habit authors have which makes me want to barf although I did not really appreciate that Carson did cheat once but otherwise I loved how sweet this was!
5/5/2018 c21 Guest
Great Read! Enjoyed it a lot!
Great Read! Enjoyed it a lot!