for Dirty Picture3/27/2011 c1 Hale-Stormer
Loved the beginning. This story sounds pretty cool. Though Victor sounds like asshole
Loved the beginning. This story sounds pretty cool. Though Victor sounds like asshole
3/24/2011 c7 
387tolerate
Allyson should burn in hell! Gosh, Riley, what are you doing? Poor Maya! ): Write more!
387tolerateAllyson should burn in hell! Gosh, Riley, what are you doing? Poor Maya! ): Write more!
3/24/2011 c6 tolerate
Aww, Riley is getting even more mysterious and handsome as the story goes on. Oh my god, you have to write the next chapter!
Aww, Riley is getting even more mysterious and handsome as the story goes on. Oh my god, you have to write the next chapter!
3/24/2011 c5 tolerate
Oh my god, did Riley do her homework? And woah, this Riley seems to be a complicated person, eh? Ah, so excited! Next chapter I go! :D
Oh my god, did Riley do her homework? And woah, this Riley seems to be a complicated person, eh? Ah, so excited! Next chapter I go! :D
3/18/2011 c3 tolerate
Gosh, Riley really is Satan's (I almost typed Santa) son! He's horrible! Gah, he needs to be punished!
Gosh, Riley really is Satan's (I almost typed Santa) son! He's horrible! Gah, he needs to be punished!
3/18/2011 c1 2Wiseau Films
OH HI
If you review my very well written poetry with long and helpful critique I will do the same for you!
OH BYE
2Wiseau FilmsOH HI
If you review my very well written poetry with long and helpful critique I will do the same for you!
OH BYE
3/17/2011 c1 7SophieInPink
Wow. Interesting start! I really like the introduction at the beginning where she explains herself. Also, the dialogue was realistic and I just have a feeling that this story will be good and unique. Can't wait to read on!
soph xx
7SophieInPinkWow. Interesting start! I really like the introduction at the beginning where she explains herself. Also, the dialogue was realistic and I just have a feeling that this story will be good and unique. Can't wait to read on!
soph xx