3/19/2011 c1 6Cole Culain
This review is for the Review Marathon. Details via link on my profile.

Okay, what I really like here is that you captured the spirit of a japanese hero story. I have read a few of them, and this would not seem out of place in a traditional storybook.

I also like how you reflect the legendary monster. It's big and dopey and strong, like many other monsters of it's ilk.