for The Spooky Ketchup3/20/2011 c1 
612simpleplan13
"You are,/You are."... I didn't get why you repeated that line.
"Squirts out lid,"... did you mean out of? Because out lid doesn't make sense.
Obviously not the best written piece, but I did enjoy it 'cause it was funny. And I know how that feels definitely. I also liked the :( after yuck it was cute.
PS Check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile)
612simpleplan13"You are,/You are."... I didn't get why you repeated that line.
"Squirts out lid,"... did you mean out of? Because out lid doesn't make sense.
Obviously not the best written piece, but I did enjoy it 'cause it was funny. And I know how that feels definitely. I also liked the :( after yuck it was cute.
PS Check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile)